礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific details.

範例: Yes, I believe I am good at giving gifts because I enjoy making others happy. Although I sometimes find it difficult to choose the perfect present, I usually ask my loved ones for advice to ensure the gift is thoughtful and appreciated.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to organise your ideas, and provide specific examples of occasions when you give gifts.

範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as my loved ones' birthdays, New Year's Eve, and other festivals celebrated in my country. Additionally, when I am invited to a friend's house, I like to bring a gift as a token of appreciation.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, and provide specific considerations when choosing a gift.

範例: Choosing a gift can be challenging for me, so I often ask my loved ones for advice. I consider the recipient's interests, preferences, and the price of the gift to ensure it is appropriate and within my budget.

建議: Your answer is clear but very brief. To improve, provide a complete sentence with correct grammar and add a reason or explanation to enrich your response.

範例: No, I have never given a handmade gift because I usually prefer to buy presents. However, I think handmade gifts can be very special and personal.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use linking words to connect ideas, and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

範例: No, I don't think expensive gifts necessarily express feelings better. What matters most is the thought behind the gift. For example, in my country, flowers are a popular and affordable way to show affection and create a joyful atmosphere.

× No, I've never give them a handmade gift.

✓ No, I've never given them a handmade gift.

The verb 'give' should be in the past participle form 'given' after 'have never' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× You have lots of celebrities and festival in our country and I prefer to buy for my loved ones birthday and also at New Year's Eve anniversaries and the like.

✓ You have lots of celebrities and festivals in our country and I prefer to buy for my loved ones' birthdays and also at New Year's Eve anniversaries and the like.

The nouns 'festival' and 'birthday' should be plural to match 'lots of' and 'loved ones' respectively. Also, 'loved ones' should be possessive as it refers to their birthdays.

× So when in when we invited to our friends place, I prefer to buy lots of gifts for them for their.

✓ So when we are invited to our friends' place, I prefer to buy lots of gifts for them.

The phrase 'when in when we invited' is incorrect; it should be 'when we are invited'. Also, 'friends place' should be possessive 'friends' place'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'for their', which is unnecessary and removed.

× It's really difficult for me because I'm not good at to buy lots of things, so I ask for my loved ones here.

✓ It's really difficult for me because I'm not good at buying lots of things, so I ask my loved ones here.

The phrase 'not good at to buy' is incorrect; after 'good at' the verb should be in the -ing form, so 'buying' is correct. Also, 'ask for my loved ones here' is awkward; 'ask my loved ones' is better.

× Some of them people don't like about lots of things, so we should consider all of them.

✓ Some of those people don't like lots of things, so we should consider all of them.

The phrase 'Some of them people' is incorrect; it should be 'Some of those people'. Also, 'don't like about lots of things' is incorrect; 'don't like lots of things' is correct.

× Yes, definitely. It produced a joyful and energetic atmosphere and others think that it's sensitive for them.

✓ Yes, definitely. It produces a joyful and energetic atmosphere and others think that it's sensitive for them.

The verb 'produced' is past tense but the context suggests a general statement, so present tense 'produces' is appropriate.

× And the other thing that I like to mention is that I'm not good at purchasing gifts, so I ask for my loved ones to help me.

✓ And the other thing that I like to mention is that I'm not good at purchasing gifts, so I ask my loved ones to help me.

The phrase 'ask for my loved ones to help me' is incorrect; it should be 'ask my loved ones to help me' without 'for'.

× But I love to do that because it's producer joyful and vibrant atmosphere.

✓ But I love to do that because it produces a joyful and vibrant atmosphere.

The word 'producer' is incorrect here; the correct verb form is 'produces' in present tense to match the context.

× So it's sometimes we prefer to buy. Flower is really common in my country because it produces joyful atmosphere for others, we sometimes buy a car and sometimes buy.

✓ So sometimes we prefer to buy. Flowers are really common in my country because they produce a joyful atmosphere for others. We sometimes buy a car and sometimes other things.

The sentence has several issues: 'Flower' should be plural 'Flowers'; 'produces joyful atmosphere' needs an article 'a joyful atmosphere'; the sentence is incomplete and needs clarification at the end.