礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น ใช้ 'I am good at giving gifts' แทน 'I have a good at giving gift give' และใช้คำกริยาในรูปที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I usually look for details that suit each person' เพื่อให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจนมากขึ้น

範例: I am good at giving gifts, especially because I carefully select presents that suit each friend's personality and preferences.

建議: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น 'I usually give gifts to my friends on special occasions like graduation ceremonies, birthdays, or Christmas.' และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล

範例: I usually give gifts to my friends on special occasions such as graduation ceremonies, birthdays, and Christmas because these days are meaningful for celebration.

建議: ควรใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น 'I usually select gifts based on the recipient's preferences.' และเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนพร้อมใช้ linking words เช่น 'For example, one of my friends prefers handmade gifts, so I make something myself or bring local items for her.'

範例: I usually select gifts based on the recipient's preferences. For example, one of my friends prefers handmade gifts, so I create something myself or bring local products for her.

建議: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคและใช้คำกริยาให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I definitely like making handmade gifts, but it depends on the receiver.' และใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'If they don't like handmade gifts, I don't make them, but if they do, I usually create paintings.'

範例: I definitely like making handmade gifts, but it depends on the receiver. If they don't like handmade gifts, I avoid making them, but if they appreciate them, I usually create paintings.

建議: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจน เช่น 'In my opinion, expensive gifts are not the best way to express my feelings.' และเพิ่มรายละเอียดสนับสนุน พร้อมใช้ linking words เช่น 'As a student, I don't have much money to spend on expensive gifts, so I prefer to make handmade gifts and write letters.'

範例: In my opinion, expensive gifts are not the best way to express my feelings. As a student, I don't have much money to spend on expensive gifts, so I prefer to make handmade gifts and write letters.

× Some of my friends say to me that I have a good at giving gift give.

✓ Some of my friends say to me that I am good at giving gifts.

The phrase 'have a good at' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'am good at'. Also, 'gift give' is incorrect; it should be 'giving gifts'. The preposition 'at' is used with 'good' to indicate skill.

× Especially the way I select a gift for some specific friend.

✓ Especially the way I select a gift for some specific friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of 'some specific', which implies more than one person.

× I usually looking some detail that suit for each people.

✓ I usually look for some details that suit each person.

The verb 'looking' should be in base form 'look' after 'usually'. Also, 'some detail' should be plural 'some details'. The preposition 'for' is needed after 'look'. 'Each people' is incorrect; it should be 'each person'.

× I usually give gifts to my friend for some special day such as graduated ceremony or some some birthday I think is the best the best day to give the gift or or some Christmas Day is the good days too.

✓ I usually give gifts to my friends on special days such as graduation ceremonies or birthdays. I think these are the best days to give gifts, and Christmas Day is a good day too.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'some special day' which should be plural 'special days'. 'Graduated ceremony' is incorrect; correct term is 'graduation ceremony'. 'Some some birthday' is repetitive and should be 'birthdays'. 'The best the best day' is repetitive; use 'the best days'. 'Or or' is repetitive and should be removed. 'Is the good days' is incorrect; should be 'is a good day'.

× I usually I usually select your gift based on some people preference.

✓ I usually select gifts based on people's preferences.

'Your gift' is incorrect; it should be 'gifts' to match the context. 'Some people preference' should be 'people's preferences' to show possession and plural form.

× For example my one of my friend prefer some handmade gift so I do some handmade gift and bring some local things to her and that's it.

✓ For example, one of my friends prefers handmade gifts, so I make some handmade gifts and bring some local items to her, and that's it.

'My one of my friend' is incorrect; correct is 'one of my friends'. 'Friend' should be plural. 'Prefer' should be 'prefers' to agree with singular subject 'one'. 'Some handmade gift' should be plural 'handmade gifts'. 'Do' is better replaced with 'make' for gifts. 'Some local things' is better as 'some local items'.

× Definitely umm I'm a person who really like to doing some handmade gift but it's depend on who is the receiver.

✓ Definitely, I'm a person who really likes doing handmade gifts, but it depends on who the receiver is.

'Like to doing' is incorrect; correct form is 'likes doing' or 'likes to do'. 'It's depend' should be 'it depends'. Word order in 'who is the receiver' should be 'who the receiver is'.

× If they don't like the handmade gift I want doing some handmade but if some people want to I usually do for them for some painting.

✓ If they don't like handmade gifts, I don't want to make them, but if some people want them, I usually make paintings for them.

'I want doing' is incorrect; should be 'I don't want to make'. 'Some handmade' is incomplete; should be 'handmade gifts'. 'If some people want to' is incomplete; should be 'if some people want them'. 'Do for them for some painting' is awkward; better as 'make paintings for them'.

× For my opinion I think is not the best way for express my feelings.

✓ In my opinion, I think it is not the best way to express my feelings.

The phrase 'For my opinion' should be 'In my opinion'. 'For express' should be 'to express'. 'I think is' should be 'I think it is'.

× Since is as the student I don't have much money for expense on expensive gift, so I usually prefer to do handmade gift and write the letter for.

✓ Since I am a student, I don't have much money to spend on expensive gifts, so I usually prefer to make handmade gifts and write letters.

'Since is as the student' is incorrect; should be 'Since I am a student'. 'Money for expense on' should be 'money to spend on'. 'Expensive gift' should be plural 'expensive gifts'. 'Do handmade gift' should be 'make handmade gifts'. 'Write the letter for' is incomplete; better as 'write letters'.