礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), avoid filler words, and keep to 1–2 sentences. Use correct prepositions and plural/singular forms.

範例: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts to people close to me because it makes special occasions feel more meaningful.

建議: Give a clear time expression and a short reason. Use simple, correct phrases for occasions (e.g., 'on birthdays', 'at the end of the year'), and avoid redundant words. Keep to two sentences and use linking words like 'and' or 'also'.

範例: I usually give gifts on birthdays because they are personal celebrations, and I also like to give presents at the end of the year to show my appreciation.

建議: Start with a topic sentence naming the main consideration, then give 1–2 specific details. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'suit them', 'based on their personality', 'their likes and dislikes'). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'so'.

範例: I consider whether the gift suits their personality and interests. For example, I check their likes and dislikes and sometimes do a bit of research so I don't give the same thing twice.

建議: Use past/present tense correctly and keep sentences clear. Begin with a direct answer (Yes/No + when), then give one or two brief reasons or details. Avoid repetition and correct expressions like 'I used to' and 'write messages'.

範例: Yes, I used to give handmade cards when I was a child because I couldn't afford store-bought gifts. Now I rarely make them because I'm a little shy about writing personal messages.

建議: Answer directly and give a concise reason with an example. Use correct vocabulary ('handmade' not 'handmaid') and avoid vague phrases. Keep to two sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

範例: Not really — I think handmade gifts can express feelings better because they show personal effort. For example, a handmade card often feels more meaningful than an expensive item.

× I'm good at giving a gift in term of I enjoy to give the person in the special occasions to the people around me, but.

✓ I'm good at giving gifts in the sense that I enjoy giving presents to people on special occasions.

Multiple preposition and phrasing errors: 'in term of' should be 'in the sense that' (idiomatic), 'enjoy to give' should be 'enjoy giving' (verb + -ing), 'give the person' should be 'giving presents to people', and 'in the special occasions to the people around me' should be 'on special occasions to people around me'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('in the sense that', 'on special occasions') and change verb form to gerund after 'enjoy'.

× Personally I usually give the present to the other when that's birthday because I think it is the personal occasions for someone and in the end of the years I would love to give them person.

✓ Personally, I usually give presents to others on their birthdays because I think birthdays are personal occasions, and at the end of the year I like to give them gifts.

Pronoun and article errors: 'the other' should be 'others' or 'other people'; 'that's birthday' should be 'their birthdays' (possessive pronoun and plural for general statement); 'personal occasions for someone' is awkward — 'personal occasions' works without 'for someone'; 'in the end of the years' should be 'at the end of the year'; 'give them person' should be 'give them gifts'. Suggestion: use correct possessive pronouns and plural forms for general habits, and choose appropriate nouns ('gifts', 'birthdays').

× I consider that the keep shoes suit them well and based on their personality.

✓ I consider whether the shoes suit them well and whether the gift is based on their personality.

Word choice and sentence structure: 'the keep shoes' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'whether the shoes' or 'that the shoes'. Also need parallel structure: 'suit them well' and 'are based on their personality'. Suggestion: use 'whether' to introduce considerations and maintain parallel clauses.

× Like or dislike. I have to do some research sometimes when I'm not sure about this or don't repeat the person.

✓ I consider their likes and dislikes. I have to do some research sometimes when I'm not sure, so I don't repeat the same gift for a person.

Fragment and pronoun reference errors: 'Like or dislike.' is a fragment; should be 'their likes and dislikes'. 'Don't repeat the person' is incorrect — you don't repeat a person, you avoid repeating a gift for the same person. Suggestion: use complete sentences and clearer pronoun references.

× I do when I was a kid because I don't have much money to buy a gift, so I make them a card, but but I love is actually I don't have much opportunity to do this right now because I'm shy to like in write their message.

✓ I did when I was a kid because I didn't have much money to buy gifts, so I made cards for them. Actually, I don't have many opportunities to do this now because I'm shy about writing messages.

Tense consistency and verb forms: 'I do when I was a kid' mixes present and past — use past 'I did'. 'Don't have much money' should be past 'didn't have much money'. 'I make them a card' should be past 'I made cards'. 'I don't have much opportunity' should be 'I don't have many opportunities' (count noun). 'I'm shy to like in write their message' is ungrammatical — use 'shy about writing messages'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent when describing past events and use correct prepositions ('about writing').

× Not really, sometime the handmaid gift is always express my feeling.

✓ Not really. Sometimes a handmade gift always expresses my feelings.

Word choice and agreement: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb), 'handmaid' is wrong word — should be 'handmade', and 'is always express' should be 'always expresses' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' or 'my feelings' is more natural. Suggestion: correct spelling and ensure verb agrees with singular subject.

× I feel good with it and I hope that I can do it and give it back for them.

✓ I feel good about it and I hope that I can make them and give them to those people.

Pronoun and verb choice issues: 'feel good with it' should be 'feel good about it'. 'I hope that I can do it and give it back for them' is unclear; likely meaning 'I hope that I can make them and give them to those people' or 'I hope I can make one and give it to them'. Suggestion: clarify the object and use correct prepositions ('about') and verbs ('make' or 'give').