礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid filler words and repetition.

範例: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts because I enjoy choosing presents for people I meet. For example, whenever I visit friends or family I often bring a small item that suits their taste, which makes them feel appreciated.

建議: Use correct verb forms and clearer structure: state typical times first, then give a concise example. Use linking words like "usually" and "also" appropriately.

範例: I usually give gifts on birthdays and during festivals. For instance, during our biggest festival I prepare presents for my close family members to celebrate together.

建議: Organize your points into one clear topic sentence followed by 1–2 specific criteria. Avoid repeating phrases and use correct grammar (e.g. interests, need).

範例: I consider the recipient's interests and needs when choosing a gift. For example, if a friend enjoys cooking I might buy a useful kitchen tool, but if someone needs warm clothes I would choose a cozy scarf.

建議: Provide a clear Yes/No answer then describe one or two examples with correct tense and phrasing. Remove fillers and correct possessive pronouns.

範例: Yes, I often give handmade gifts because they feel more personal. For example, I sometimes draw small sketches or sew simple clothing items, and my friends appreciate the effort.

建議: Make your position clear with a concise reason and a short example. Use comparative grammar correctly ("better express" and "more valuable"). Avoid unclear phrases.

範例: No, I don't think expensive gifts necessarily express feelings better because thoughtfulness matters more than price. For example, a small handmade card or a meaningful book can be more valuable to someone than an expensive but impersonal item.

× Is I think I'm a good at giving gifts, uh 'cause I like to give gifts for everyone, whoever I meet and whenever I go someone to visit, I like to get a gift for them. So as I like, maybe.

✓ I think I'm good at giving gifts because I like to give gifts to everyone I meet, and whenever I visit someone I like to bring a gift for them.

The original sentence uses incorrect subject pronoun order ('Is I think'), extra articles ('a good'), incorrect prepositions ('give gifts for'), and awkward clauses ('whenever I go someone to visit'). Use 'I think' at the start, drop the unnecessary 'a' before 'good', use 'to' when indicating a recipient, and reorder the visiting phrase to 'whenever I visit someone'. Combine clauses with clear connectors like 'because' and 'and'. Suggestions: start with 'I think', use 'good at', use 'give to', and use 'visit someone'.

× I usually give a gift when someone have their birthday anniversary and also I like to give someone when our festival is arrive, I like to give to my close one that time. So yeah, it's a depending on the occasion and and festival and the events.

✓ I usually give a gift when someone has their birthday or anniversary, and I also like to give gifts during our festivals; I give to my close ones at those times. So yeah, it depends on the occasion, the festival, or the event.

Errors include subject-verb agreement ('someone have' should be 'someone has'), incorrect noun phrases ('birthday anniversary' is redundant), wrong verb form ('is arrive' should be 'arrive' or 'occurs') and incorrect use of 'depending' without subject. Use 'has' for third-person singular, use plural 'close ones', and the simple present 'it depends' for habitual actions. Also replace 'give someone when our festival is arrive' with 'give gifts during our festivals'. Suggestions: use correct third-person singular verbs, use 'during' for events, and use 'it depends' for general statements.

× I consider what they really interested and what they really need and what they really want. I I consider, I consider what they now really needs that kind of thing. So I like to give that products and something that they really wanted or needed. That's kind of thing I like to.

✓ I consider what they are really interested in, what they really need, and what they really want. I think about what they now really need, so I like to give products or things that they really want or need. That's the kind of thing I like to do.

Mistakes include incorrect verb patterns ('interested' requires 'be interested in'), redundancy and wrong tense ('needs' after 'they now' and 'wanted' mixed past), incorrect determiner and noun number ('that products'), and missing infinitive 'to do'. Use 'are interested in', 'need' for present, and match nouns and determiners ('products' with 'those' or just 'products'). Ensure consistent present tense for habitual actions. Suggestions: use 'be interested in', keep present tense for habits, match determiners and plural nouns, and include 'to do' for 'like to'.

× It is. I give handmade gifts. Uh, it's feel so precious when I'm made by myself. Uh, I like to make some drawing scratch and some clothes I made by my, myself. So I like to that kind of thing to give them for.

✓ Yes, I give handmade gifts. They feel very special when I make them myself. I like to draw and I sometimes make clothes by myself. So I like to give those kinds of things to people.

Problems include vague 'It is.' and incorrect use of 'it's feel' (subject-verb agreement and wrong contraction), incorrect passive 'when I'm made by myself' (should be active 'I make them myself'), wrong noun phrase 'drawing scratch', and awkward preposition 'give them for'. Use 'they feel' to refer to gifts, 'make them myself' for producing items, 'draw' for making drawings, 'those kinds of things', and 'give to people'. Suggestions: use clear subjects, correct verb forms, active voice for actions you perform, correct nouns for activities, and 'give to' for recipients.

× I do not think expensive gift better express our feelings because it's a depending on the gift what they really want and what what they really likes. If I give them some cheaper and and it's value more than our expensive gift, it's that's the pain not for expensive.

✓ I do not think expensive gifts better express our feelings because it depends on what the recipient really wants and likes. If I give them something cheaper that has more meaning than an expensive gift, then the cheaper gift matters more than an expensive one.

Errors include missing plural 'gifts', incorrect comparative structure ('better express' is okay but needs subject agreement), wrong phrase 'it's a depending', incorrect pronoun 'what what they really likes' (double 'what' and wrong verb form), and unclear final sentence with wrong vocabulary ('that's the pain not for expensive'). Use 'it depends on', plural nouns for general statements, correct verb forms 'likes' -> 'like' for third person, and clearer comparative phrasing 'has more meaning' or 'matters more'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, 'it depends on' for dependence, correct verb agreement, and clearer vocabulary for expressing value or meaning.