礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời đã trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có một vài lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không chính xác (ví dụ "a type person" nên là "the type of person", thiếu "a" trong "who think"). Nên rút gọn để tự nhiên hơn, dùng câu đơn và một câu bổ trợ tối đa 2-3 cụm chi tiết, tránh lặp ý. Hãy sửa ngữ pháp và thêm liên từ đơn giản nếu cần để câu mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I think I'm quite good at giving gifts. I'm the kind of person who thinks carefully before buying, so I try to choose something useful rather than something random.

建議: Câu trả lời ngắn, trực tiếp nhưng hơi cụt và thiếu mạch. Nên mở rộng bằng một câu bổ sung với liên từ (e.g. "usually") và ví dụ cụ thể để cho thấy khả năng mở rộng chủ đề mà vẫn giữ ngắn gọn.

範例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays or anniversaries. For example, I always get something small for close friends on their birthdays.

建議: Nội dung rõ ràng và cụ thể, nhưng có vài lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp (ví dụ "people personality" → "people's personality"), và lặp từ "I think". Nên dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn và một liên từ để kết nối ý (e.g. "because").

範例: I usually consider the person's personality and interests, because a thoughtful and practical gift suits them better than something expensive but random.

建議: Ý hay và cụ thể, nhưng câu đầu có lỗi ("Guest Once" không phù hợp). Nên dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu ví dụ cụ thể với thời điểm và cảm xúc. Tránh lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp nhỏ.

範例: Yes. Once I made a small birthday card for a close friend. It wasn't sophisticated, but it felt more personal and they really appreciated it.

建議: Ý chính rõ nhưng câu rời rạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, lặp từ, và thiếu liên từ dẫn đến thiếu mạch lạc (ví dụ "a friend's one"; "I that I wanted"; "be because it show"). Cần trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng một câu hỗ trợ mạch lạc với nguyên nhân rõ ràng. Chú ý chia thì và cấu trúc câu đúng.

範例: Not really. For example, a friend once gave me an expensive book that I had wanted for a long time. I loved it not because of the price but because it showed they had noticed my interests.

× I think I'm fairly good at it. I'm a type person who think a while before buying so I usually avoid choosing something useless.

✓ I think I'm fairly good at it. I'm the type of person who thinks for a while before buying, so I usually avoid choosing something useless.

The phrase needs the definite article 'the' before 'type of person' and the structure 'type of person who thinks' requires 'thinks' (third person singular). Also add 'for' in 'for a while' and a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so'. Suggestions: remember fixed expression 'the type of person', use third person singular verb with 'who', include preposition 'for' with time expressions.

× When they have a special occasion like birthday or celebration.

✓ When they have a special occasion like a birthday or a celebration.

Countable nouns such as 'birthday' and 'celebration' require an article. Use 'a birthday' and 'a celebration' or include 'their' depending on context. Suggestions: use articles with singular countable nouns.

× I usually think about people personality and interest. I think a thoughtful and practical gift is better than expensive but random.

✓ I usually think about people's personality and interests. I think a thoughtful and practical gift is better than an expensive but random one.

Possessive form 'people's' is needed. 'Personality' and 'interest' should be pluralized to match general meaning. In the second sentence, 'an' is required before 'expensive', and 'one' completes the comparison to refer to 'gift'. Suggestions: use possessive 'people's', pluralize general nouns, and use 'one' to avoid repeating nouns.

× Guest Once I made a small birthday card for close friends. It wasn't sophisticated, but it felt more personal.

✓ Once I made a small birthday card for close friends. It wasn't sophisticated, but it felt more personal.

The word 'Guest' is likely a typo and should be removed. The rest uses correct past tense forms 'made' and 'felt'. Suggestions: remove stray words and check for typos.

× Not really. Uh a friend's one gave me a book that I that I wanted for a long time. It was expensive but I really love it be because it show they really paid attention.

✓ Not really. A friend once gave me a book that I had wanted for a long time. It was expensive, but I really loved it because it showed they had really paid attention.

Use past perfect 'had wanted' to show desire before the giving, 'loved' for past feeling, 'because' without extra words, and 'showed' for past tense. Remove duplicate 'that I'. Also 'a friend's one' is incorrect; use 'a friend once' or 'a friend's gift'. Suggestions: avoid duplicate words, use correct past tenses (past perfect when appropriate), and correct noun phrases like 'a friend's one' to 'a friend's gift' or 'a friend once'.