礼物— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts because I try to choose items that match each person's tastes. For example, if a friend loves cooking, I might buy a high-quality spice set; otherwise I ask their close friends for suggestions so the present is useful and appreciated.

建議: Open with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to justify your choice. Correct grammar (e.g., 'on their birthday') and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: I usually give gifts on my friends' birthdays because it's a natural occasion to celebrate. Also, I choose gifts based on their preferences so the present feels personal and meaningful.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific considerations with examples. Fix grammar and remove hesitations. Use linking words like 'first' and 'also' to structure the answer.

範例: I consider two main things when choosing a gift. First, I think about the recipient's preferences so the gift suits their hobbies; also I watch my budget to make sure the present is affordable yet thoughtful.

建議: Use correct tense and clearer structure. State the experience, then explain why with one specific reason or example. Avoid filler words and unfinished sentences.

範例: Yes, I have. For example, I made a handmade birthday card for a close friend because I believe handmade gifts feel more personal and can capture shared memories, such as adding photos or inside jokes.

建議: Give a clear position and support it with contrasting reasons using linking words like 'however' and 'for example'. Correct grammar and finish your thoughts.

範例: I think it depends. Expensive gifts can show strong commitment if they match the person's desires; however, handmade or thoughtful presents often express feelings more genuinely because they reflect time and care.

× I would base on their preference and their daily help us to choose the gift to them.

✓ I would base my choice on their preferences and on their daily needs to help me choose a gift for them.

The verb 'base' requires the preposition 'on' and the noun 'choice' is needed to make the phrase natural. 'Preference' should be plural to match 'their', and 'daily help us' is ungrammatical; use 'daily needs' and 'help me choose' to express purpose. Also change 'to them' to 'for them'. Suggestions: include the noun 'choice', use 'on' after 'base', pluralize when needed, and rephrase 'daily help us' to 'daily needs' or 'daily routines'.

× I usually give gifts to my friends and their birthday because I think the birthday is a good moment to celebrate and I would base on their preference to give to choose a gift to them.

✓ I usually give gifts to my friends on their birthdays because I think a birthday is a good time to celebrate, and I base my choice on their preferences when choosing a gift for them.

The correct preposition for occasions is 'on' (on their birthdays). Use 'birthdays' plural for different friends. 'Base on' must be 'base my choice on'. 'Give to choose a gift to them' is incorrect; use 'when choosing a gift for them'. Suggestions: use 'on' for dates/occasions, include the noun 'choice', pluralize where appropriate, and use 'choose' gerund form after 'when'.

× I would consider the preference and the budget because I think I aiming to buy something as a gift for them to fit their preference.

✓ I consider their preferences and my budget because I aim to buy a gift that fits their tastes.

The original mixes conditional 'would' with present intentions and uses incorrect verb forms. Use simple present 'consider' and 'aim' to state habitual actions. 'I thinking I aiming' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I aim'. 'Fit their preference' should be 'fits their tastes' or 'fits their preferences'. Suggestions: use consistent present tense for habitual behaviour and correct verb forms.

× I don't want to, I don't want them. I don't want to let them disappoint about the gifts.

✓ I don't want them to be disappointed with the gifts.

Sentence fragments and repetition make this unclear. 'I don't want to let them disappoint about the gifts' is incorrect: 'let them disappoint' is wrong verb and structure. Use 'I don't want them to be disappointed' and the preposition 'with' or 'by' to indicate the cause. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use correct passive construction 'to be disappointed'.

× Sure, I have gave my friends a handmade birthday card Cos I think the handmade is more thoughtful and intimate as a gift to my friends and I think when I'm making the course I think that I can record the memories with the.

✓ Sure, I have given my friends handmade birthday cards because I think handmade gifts are more thoughtful and intimate, and when I'm making them I can record the memories.

Present perfect requires past participle 'given', not 'gave'. 'Cos' is informal; use 'because'. Use plural 'cards' or 'a handmade birthday card' consistently. 'The handmade is' is incorrect; say 'handmade gifts are'. 'Making the course' is wrong—use 'making them'. Remove trailing incomplete phrase. Suggestions: use correct past participle with present perfect, avoid informal abbreviations, keep consistent singular/plural, and complete the sentence.

× If my friends really love that gift which is have a higher price and I would hope she or he to be happy so I would consider to buy it.

✓ If my friend really loves an expensive gift and I hope they will be happy, I would consider buying it.

Pronoun and number issues: 'friends' with 'she or he' is awkward—use 'friend' and singular 'loves', or use plural 'friends' with 'they'. 'Which is have a higher price' is ungrammatical; use 'an expensive gift'. 'Hope she or he to be happy' should be 'hope they will be happy'. 'Consider to buy' should be 'consider buying'. Suggestions: match singular/plural consistently, use 'they' as a gender-neutral singular, and use gerund after 'consider'.

× However a handmade gift would be more.

✓ However, a handmade gift would mean more.

The sentence is incomplete: 'would be more' needs an object such as 'meaningful' or 'valuable emotionally'. Common expression is 'mean more' or 'mean more to someone'. Add a comma after 'However'. Suggestions: complete the idea by using 'mean more' or 'be more meaningful' and include the target (to them).