金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và đảm bảo câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên.

範例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends before, especially in emergencies. For instance, once I needed some money to buy study materials before an important exam. I made sure to borrow a small amount and promised to pay it back promptly because I believe in being responsible.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

範例: Yes, I have lent money to my friends before. For example, one of my friends needed some money to pay for urgent expenses, and I lent her a small amount. She promised to return it soon, and I trust her because we have a good relationship.

× Emergency like example.

✓ For example, in an emergency situation,

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear structure. It should be rephrased to form a complete and clear sentence starting with 'For example' to introduce an example properly.

× Well for example I've got an exam later but in I really apparent but I don't have.

✓ Well, for example, I've got an exam later but I really don't have time to prepare.

The original sentence is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'in I really apparent'. It should be corrected to clearly express the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.

× So I borrow some of my friends money and I make sure to pay it back because it is my responsibility for the money.

✓ So I borrow some of my friend's money and I make sure to pay it back because it is my responsibility.

The phrase 'friends money' should be possessive singular 'friend's money' because the money belongs to one friend. Also, 'responsibility for the money' is redundant; 'responsibility' alone suffices.

× Yes, I have a never lent money to each other equally.

✓ Yes, I have never lent money to others equally.

The phrase 'a never lent' is incorrect; 'never lent' is correct. Also, 'each other' is used for reciprocal actions between two people, but here 'others' is more appropriate.

× I think that other shellfish and yes I have talked to some of my friends, which she had made sure to play it because she thinks that easy to follow with 52.

✓ I think that others are selfish, and yes, I have talked to some of my friends who have made sure to pay it back because they think it is important to do so.

The original sentence has unclear pronouns and incorrect words like 'shellfish' instead of 'selfish', 'which she had made sure to play it' instead of 'who have made sure to pay it'. Pronouns should agree in number and clarity.

× I'm borrowing money.

✓ I am borrowing money.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity and formality, 'I am borrowing money' is better. However, this sentence is isolated and lacks context; it should be integrated properly.