金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，缺少完整的句子结构和具体细节。建议你直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并且提供具体原因或经历。

範例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I don't like to owe people. I prefer to manage my expenses carefully to avoid borrowing.

建議: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不清楚，缺少逻辑和细节。建议你用完整句子说明你借钱给别人的经历，并解释你的感受。

範例: Yes, I lent money to a friend when I was in primary school, but he never paid me back. Because of that experience, I am reluctant to lend money now.

× Others. In the past or in the future 'cause I don't like the feeling about. Alright, someone else money and. I think I should pay attention.

✓ Others? In the past or in the future? Because I don't like that feeling. Alright, someone else's money. I think I should pay attention.

原句句子结构混乱，缺少完整的句子和连接词，导致表达不清晰。建议将句子拆分成完整的疑问句和陈述句，使用正确的连接词和所有格形式，使表达更连贯。

× Yes, I know when I was in my primary school. Code ends up paid back to me till the until now, so I think I won't.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was in primary school. The code ended up being paid back to me until now, so I think I won't.

原句时态使用不当，'know'应为过去时'remember'，'ends up paid back'结构错误，应使用过去完成时或被动语态。建议使用正确的过去时态和被动语态表达已完成的动作。