金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，句子不完整且有语法错误。建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。

範例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my parents because I am currently living abroad and sometimes I find it difficult to manage my budget.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁表达原因并使用连接词。

範例: Yes, I have lent money to my roommate before because I understand how difficult it can be to live abroad, so we need to support each other.

× Yes, I. Had to borrow the money from my parents.

✓ Yes, I had to borrow money from my parents.

句子中断句不完整，'I.'后面不应有句号，应连贯表达完整句子。应将'I.'和后面的内容合并为完整句子。

× Because I. Ma'am, now living abroad, sometimes I cannot live under my budget.

✓ Because I, ma'am, am now living abroad, sometimes I cannot live within my budget.

句子结构不完整，'I.'后不应有句号，且缺少动词'am'。'live under my budget'表达不准确，应为'live within my budget'。

× But I usually.

✓ But I usually manage.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清。应补充谓语使句子完整。

× Yes, I have a land money to my roommate before.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to my roommate before.

'a land money'是错误表达，应为' have lent money'，'lend'的过去分词形式是'lent'，表示过去完成动作。

× Because I understanding the difficult situation when living abroad and we need to help each other because we need to survive.

✓ Because I understand the difficult situation when living abroad, and we need to help each other to survive.

'I understanding'应为'I understand'，动词应使用一般现在时。句子中缺少连接词和不定式表达目的，需调整。