金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且补充更多细节使回答更完整。

範例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my parents a few times, usually small amounts like $10 or $15, and I always repay them immediately.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和单词，避免重复，并且补充具体细节使回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, I sometimes lent money to my classmates when I was at university, especially when we went out for dinner together and they needed a little help.

× I really borrowed money from others I only borrowed from from my parents and return it back immediately.

✓ I really borrowed money from others. I only borrowed from my parents and returned it back immediately.

句子中时态不一致，前半句使用了过去时borrowed，后半句却用了现在时return，应保持时态一致，改为过去时returned。

× I only borrowed from from my parents and return it back immediately.

✓ I only borrowed from my parents and returned it immediately.

“borrowed from from”中重复了介词“from”，应去掉一个；另外“return it back”中“return”已经包含“回”的意思，后面的“back”是多余的，应去掉。

× Yes, I sometimes dent money to others and when I was at university, we, I I often ate dinner with with my classmates.

✓ Yes, I sometimes lend money to others and when I was at university, I often ate dinner with my classmates.

“dent”应为“lend”，是拼写错误；“sometimes”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“lend”；“we, I I”重复，应去掉“we”和多余的“I”；“with with”重复，应去掉一个“with”。

× They sometimes borrow.

✓ They sometimes borrow money.

句子不完整，缺少宾语“money”，使句子完整且符合语法。