金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如时态和单复数的使用不准确，影响了表达的自然性和准确性。此外，回答中断断续续，缺少连贯的连接词，导致表达不够流畅。建议注意时态一致性，使用适当的连接词使回答更连贯，同时避免重复和不必要的停顿。

範例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I believe it can harm our relationships. For instance, I once lent money to a friend, but he never paid me back, which made me feel embarrassed.

建議: 回答中存在多处语法错误和断句不连贯的问题，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意动词时态的正确使用，避免句子断裂，使用连接词使句子更完整和流畅。同时，回答内容可以更具体，说明原因或感受。

範例: Yes, I lent money to my best friend last month. However, he hasn't returned it yet, which makes me feel embarrassed. I think this situation might have caused some problems in our relationship, but I'm not sure.

× No, I never borrow money from others.

✓ No, I never borrow money from others.

此句中“never borrow”用于表达习惯性动作，时态使用正确，无需修改。

× I think this will destroy the relationship between. Us?

✓ I think this will destroy the relationship between us.

句子中“between”后面不应断开，应与“us”连写，且句末不应有问号，保持完整句子结构。

× For example, I once lend some money to others, but he didn't give it back.

✓ For example, I once lent some money to others, but he didn't give it back.

“lend”的过去式是“lent”，描述过去发生的动作时应使用过去式。

× Yes, last month I lend money to my, best friend.

✓ Yes, last month I lent money to my best friend.

“lend”的过去式是“lent”，描述过去发生的动作时应使用过去式。句中逗号位置错误，应去掉。

× But a month later, he never. Give it back.

✓ But a month later, he never gave it back.

描述过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式“gave”，且句中断句错误，应连贯表达。

× I think maybe it's. Have some problem. On our relationship, I don't know.

✓ I think maybe there's some problem in our relationship, I don't know.

句子断开不完整，应合并为完整句子，使用“there's”表示存在，介词应为“in”而非“on”。