金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“haven't borrow”应为“haven't borrowed”，同时表达不够自然，且细节不够具体。建议注意时态和动词形式的正确使用，避免重复表达，并提供更具体的例子来支持观点。

範例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because my father always advised me that borrowing can lead to financial problems. For instance, if you fail to repay on time, it might damage your relationships.

建議: 你的回答中有多处语法和用词错误，如“learned a lot of money”应为“lent a lot of money”，“she want”应为“she wanted”，且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础，理清句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I have lent money to my best friend because she wanted to invest in a company. However, before lending, I gathered a lot of information to ensure I could trust her and the investment was safe.

× I haven't borrow any money from anyone because my father always told me that you shouldn't borrow money from others because it is very risky for the future.

✓ I haven't borrowed any money from anyone because my father always told me that you shouldn't borrow money from others because it is very risky for the future.

这里使用现在完成时态，助动词have后面应该接动词的过去分词形式，borrow的过去分词是borrowed，所以应改为haven't borrowed。

× Well my answer is yes because I have learned a lot of money to my best friends because she want to invest a company but before I lend him money I after many information about it so I can trust him.

✓ Well, my answer is yes because I have lent a lot of money to my best friend because she wants to invest in a company, but before I lent him money, I gathered a lot of information about it so I could trust him.

1. 'learned' 应为 'lent'，因为题目是借钱给别人，动词应为lend的过去式lent。2. 'friends' 应为单数 'friend'，因为后文用的是 'she'，指单一女性。3. 'she want' 应为 'she wants'，第三人称单数动词需加-s。4. 'invest a company' 应为 'invest in a company'，动词invest后需加介词in。5. 'I after many information' 语法错误，应改为 'I gathered a lot of information'。6. 'lend him money' 前后时态不一致，改为过去式 'lent him money'。7. 'so I can trust him' 时态应与前文一致，改为过去式 'so I could trust him'。