金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. To improve, use correct verb tenses, avoid redundancy, and organise your response with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my family and friends during difficult financial times. For example, when I faced unexpected expenses, they kindly lent me money, and I have also lent money to them occasionally in return.

建議: Your answer is relevant but quite brief and includes hesitation. To improve, provide a more complete response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I have lent money to my friends and family when they faced financial difficulties. For instance, last year, I helped a close friend by lending some money to cover urgent bills, which strengthened our relationship.

× Yes, during my life I had lots of financial challenges.

✓ Yes, during my life I have had lots of financial challenges.

The sentence refers to experiences up to the present, so the present perfect tense 'have had' is appropriate instead of the simple past 'had'.

× So I asked for my loved ones, my families, friends and they lended some money to me

✓ So I asked my loved ones, my family, and friends, and they lent some money to me

The verb 'ask' does not require the preposition 'for' when followed by a person. Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's relatives collectively. The past tense of 'lend' is 'lent', not 'lended'.

× and on the on the around way away I sometimes lend money to them.

✓ and in return, I sometimes lend money to them.

The phrase 'on the on the around way away' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'in return' to indicate reciprocity. Also, 'lend' is correct here as it refers to habitual action in the present tense.

× Yes, umm, when my friends and loved ones have lots of financial problems, I lend some money to them.

✓ Yes, umm, when my friends and loved ones have lots of financial problems, I lend them some money.

The sentence is mostly correct, but the phrase 'lend some money to them' is better expressed as 'lend them some money' for natural English word order.