金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议注意时态和冠词的使用，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I have. When I first left university, I had little money to support myself. Therefore, I needed to borrow some money from a friend to buy a gift for my mother.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，词汇使用不准确，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的表达方式，并增加连接词使内容更连贯。

範例: I haven't lent money to others because I have only a few close friends, and they have never asked me to lend them money.

× Yes I did. I remember when I just let from the university I just little money to support myself.

✓ Yes I did. I remember when I just left the university I had little money to support myself.

这里的动词时态错误，'let' 应为 'left'，表示过去离开大学的动作，且缺少动词 'had' 来表达过去拥有少量钱的状态。应使用过去时态来描述过去发生的事情。

× I just little money to support myself.

✓ I had little money to support myself.

句子中缺少动词，且 'little money' 前应有动词 'had' 来表达拥有少量钱。

× So I really need money to buy a gift to my mother so I just borrow it from my friend.

✓ So I really needed money to buy a gift for my mother so I just borrowed it from my friend.

句子描述过去的事情，动词 'need' 和 'borrow' 应使用过去式 'needed' 和 'borrowed'。此外，'buy a gift to my mother' 应改为 'buy a gift for my mother'，介词使用错误。

× buy a gift to my mother

✓ buy a gift for my mother

英语中表达“给某人买礼物”应使用介词 'for'，而不是 'to'。

× I have a level less money to others because I'm a person who has not so many friends, only two to three friends and they never ask me to lend money to them, so I haven't had such a experience.

✓ I have never lent money to others because I'm a person who does not have many friends, only two to three friends, and they never ask me to lend money to them, so I haven't had such an experience.

'have a level less money' 是错误表达，应为 'have never lent money'，表示从未借钱给别人。'has not so many friends' 应改为 'does not have many friends'，主谓一致和表达更自然。'such a experience' 中 'a' 应改为 'an'，因为 'experience' 以元音音素开头。