金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, sometimes when I go out with my friends, I realize I haven't brought enough money, so I borrow some from them. For example, last weekend I forgot my wallet and had to borrow money to buy lunch.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, my friends often ask to borrow money from me, and I am happy to help. I believe that helping each other strengthens our friendship, so I usually lend money when they need it.

× Yes, sometime I'm hanging out with my friend, then I realize that I don't bring any bring much money, so I borrow money from the others.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I'm hanging out with my friends, I realize that I don't bring much money, so I borrow money from others.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of hanging out with more than one person. 'Any bring much money' is incorrect; 'bring' is repeated and 'any' is unnecessary here. 'The others' should be 'others' without 'the' because it refers to people in general, not a specific group.

× Yes, sometime I'm hanging out with my friend, then I realize that I don't bring any bring much money, so I borrow money from the others.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I'm hanging out with my friends, I realize that I don't bring much money, so I borrow money from others.

The phrase 'borrow money from the others' is incorrect because 'the others' implies a specific group previously mentioned, which is not the case here. The correct phrase is 'borrow money from others' to indicate people in general.

× Yes, they usually choose me to lend money and I'm willing to help them because when I need that they will be have to me contract so I like it.

✓ Yes, they usually choose me to lend money to, and I'm willing to help them because when I need it, they will have to contact me, so I like it.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and incorrect phrasing. 'Lend money' should be followed by 'to' to indicate the recipient. 'When I need that' should be 'when I need it' to refer to money. 'They will be have to me contract' is incorrect; it should be 'they will have to contact me' to express the idea of communication. The sentence is restructured for clarity.