金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'sometime' nên là 'sometimes', 'hanging out' cần chia đúng thì, và câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, sometimes when I am hanging out with my friends, I pretend that I forgot my wallet at home. Therefore, I ask my friends to lend me some money, and fortunately, they are always willing to help me.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'choose' nên là 'choose' hoặc 'choose to', 'I willing' nên là 'I am willing'. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và chi tiết hỗ trợ, đồng thời sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I am the kind of person who always chooses to lend money to others. When my friends need financial help, they often ask me, and I am willing to help them because I believe they will support me in the future when I need assistance.

× Yes, sometime when I hanging out with my friend, I reply that I will forget my wallet at home.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I am hanging out with my friend, I say that I have forgotten my wallet at home.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Hanging' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'Reply' is incorrect here; 'say' fits better. Also, 'will forget' is incorrect because the forgetting has already happened; 'have forgotten' is the correct present perfect tense to indicate a past action relevant to the present.

× Yes, sometime when I hanging out with my friend, I reply that I will forget my wallet at home.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I am hanging out with my friends, I say that I have forgotten my wallet at home.

The phrase 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match the context of hanging out with more than one person.

× Then I ask my friend to borrow money and fortunately they are willing to help me.

✓ Then I ask my friends to borrow money and fortunately they are willing to help me.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to be consistent with the previous correction and the plural pronoun 'they'.

× Yes, I am the person who always choose to lend money and when they need money they ask me.

✓ Yes, I am the person who always chooses to lend money and when they need money they ask me.

'Choose' should be 'chooses' to agree with the singular subject 'person' in the relative clause.

× I willing to help them because in the future when I need, they will support me.

✓ I am willing to help them because in the future when I need help, they will support me.

'I willing' is incorrect; it should be 'I am willing' to use the correct form of the verb 'to be' with the adjective 'willing'. Also, 'when I need' is incomplete; it should be 'when I need help' for clarity.