金钱— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
考生
No, I have never borrowed money from others because as a student I usually manage my expenses carefully and don't have many financial needs. However, I think that in the future I might need to borrow money from someone if I unexpected expenses or important situations that require financial support.
考官
Have you ever lent money to others?
考生
Yes, I have lent money to others before. For example, when my cousin and aunt was facing financial difficulties, I lent them some of the money I have said to help them cover their expenses. I felt it was important to support my family during tough times.
評估
總分
Part 1
Have you ever borrowed money from others?
分數: 75.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản tốt, nhưng bạn nên chú ý đến việc sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như "if I unexpected expenses". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để tăng tính thuyết phục.
範例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because, as a student, I usually manage my expenses carefully and have few financial needs. However, if I encounter unexpected expenses or urgent situations in the future, I might need to borrow money from someone to cover those costs.
Have you ever lent money to others?
分數: 70.0建議: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có một số lỗi ngữ pháp như "my cousin and aunt was" thay vì "were" và "money I have said" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và từ ngữ chính xác hơn. Thêm vào đó, sử dụng các từ nối sẽ giúp câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Yes, I have lent money to others before. For instance, when my cousin and aunt were facing financial difficulties, I lent them some money to help cover their expenses because I believe supporting family during tough times is very important.
文法
× However, I think that in the future I might need to borrow money from someone if I unexpected expenses or important situations that require financial support.
✓ However, I think that in the future I might need to borrow money from someone if I have unexpected expenses or important situations that require financial support.
The sentence is missing the verb 'have' after 'if I', which is necessary to complete the conditional clause. Without 'have', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. The correction adds the verb to properly express the condition.
× For example, when my cousin and aunt was facing financial difficulties, I lent them some of the money I have said to help them cover their expenses.
✓ For example, when my cousin and aunt were facing financial difficulties, I lent them some of the money I had saved to help them cover their expenses.
The subject 'my cousin and aunt' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number. Also, 'have said' is incorrect; it should be 'had saved' to indicate past perfect tense, showing the money was saved before lending.
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