金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

範例: No, I have never borrowed money from others because I manage my finances carefully and always make sure I have enough money.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和主谓一致，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: Yes, I have lent money to my best friend because he wanted to buy something but didn't have enough money. Since he is my close friend, I was happy to help him.

× I usually manage my financial carefully.

✓ I usually manage my finances carefully.

financial 是形容词，不能单独作名词使用，应该用复数名词 finances 表示财务状况。

× My money, my financial will never become zero.

✓ My money and my finances will never become zero.

financial 不能单独作名词，且此处应使用复数形式 finances 来表示财务状况。

× Yes, I lend my money to others, the people who my best friend because he want to buy something.

✓ Yes, I lend my money to others, the people who are my best friends because they want to buy something.

缺少动词 are，people 是复数，后面动词也应使用复数形式 want。

× He want to, but he didn't have enough money because he's my best friend.

✓ He wants to, but he doesn't have enough money because he's my best friend.

第三人称单数 he 后动词 want 应改为 wants，didn't have 应改为 doesn't have 以保持时态一致。

× I need to help him.

✓ I need to help him.

此句语法正确，无需修改。