金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答内容较为完整，但句子结构稍显复杂且有些冗长，建议简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。同时，可以适当使用连接词来增强逻辑性。

範例: Yes, I have. Once, after class in primary school, I realized I forgot my wallet in the classroom. Fortunately, my best friend kindly lent me some money so I could take the bus home. I was very grateful for her help.

建議: 你的回答内容具体且有条理，但部分句子较长，建议使用更多连接词来使表达更连贯。同时，可以丰富词汇，避免重复使用简单词汇。

範例: Yes, I have. When I was in senior high school, a quiet girl asked to borrow some money. I agreed because I wanted to help her. However, she never paid me back, which disappointed me a lot. Since then, I have been more cautious about lending money to others.

× I realized that I had forgotten my wallet at classroom.

✓ I realized that I had forgotten my wallet in the classroom.

介词使用错误，应该用'in'表示在某个房间内，而不是'at'。这里表示钱包忘在教室里，正确用法是'in the classroom'。

× I'm very grateful to her kindness.

✓ I'm very grateful for her kindness.

介词使用错误，表达感谢时应使用'grateful for'而不是'to'。这里应说'grateful for her kindness'。

× when my class is over

✓ when my class was over

时态错误，句子描述过去的事情，应该用过去时'was'，而不是现在时'is'。

× at classroom

✓ in the classroom

名词前缺少冠词，'classroom'是可数名词，前面应加定冠词'the'。

× once a quiet girl asked me if I could lend her some money.

✓ Once, a quiet girl asked me if I could lend her some money.

句首副词'once'后应加逗号，表示时间状语，增强句子清晰度。

× I finally agreed because I wanted to help her.

✓ I finally agreed because I wanted to help her.

该句时态正确，无需修改。

× she didn't pay me back, which made me feel very disappointed.

✓ she didn't pay me back, which made me feel very disappointed.

该句时态正确，无需修改。

× Since then, I have become more careful about lending money to others.

✓ Since then, I have become more careful about lending money to others.

该句时态正确，无需修改。