金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and sentence structure. Try to use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say, "Yes, I recently borrowed money from my friend because I needed to pay my credit card bill. However, I did not receive my salary on time, so I had to ask for help."

範例: Yes, I recently borrowed money from my friend because I needed to pay my credit card bill. However, I did not receive my salary on time, so I had to ask for help.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Use past tense and clearer sentence structure. Also, explain your reason more clearly with linking words. For example, "Yes, I have lent money only to my closest friend because he has helped me in many situations. Therefore, if I have money, I am willing to lend it to him."

範例: Yes, I have lent money only to my closest friend because he has helped me in many situations. Therefore, if I have money, I am willing to lend it to him.

× Yes, I recently borrow money from my friend because I need to pay credit card bill but I I did not get my salary on time so that I have to ask for money so that I can payment my credit card bill.

✓ Yes, I recently borrowed money from my friend because I needed to pay my credit card bill but I did not get my salary on time so I had to ask for money so that I could pay my credit card bill.

The verb 'borrow' should be in the past tense 'borrowed' to match the past time reference 'recently'. Similarly, 'need' should be 'needed' and 'have to' should be 'had to' to maintain past tense consistency. Also, 'can payment' is incorrect; it should be 'could pay' because 'pay' is the verb and 'could' is the past modal verb. Using correct past tense verbs ensures the sentence accurately reflects past events.

× Yes, I recently borrow money from my friend because I need to pay credit card bill but I I did not get my salary on time so that I have to ask for money so that I can payment my credit card bill.

✓ Yes, I recently borrowed money from my friend because I needed to pay my credit card bill but I did not get my salary on time so I had to ask for money so that I could pay my credit card bill.

The phrase 'can payment' is incorrect because 'payment' is a noun. The correct form is 'could pay' where 'pay' is the base verb following the modal verb 'could'. This correction ensures proper verb usage after modal verbs.

× Yes, I recently borrow money from my friend because I need to pay credit card bill but I I did not get my salary on time so that I have to ask for money so that I can payment my credit card bill.

✓ Yes, I recently borrowed money from my friend because I needed to pay my credit card bill but I did not get my salary on time so I had to ask for money so that I could pay my credit card bill.

The phrase 'credit card bill' should include the possessive determiner 'my' to specify whose bill it is. Also, 'credit card bill' is singular and correct here, but adding 'my' clarifies the meaning. Proper use of possessive adjectives improves sentence clarity.

× Yes, I only give money to my closest friend because he helps me a lot on many situations so that if I have money I let them.

✓ Yes, I only give money to my closest friend because he helps me a lot in many situations so if I have money, I lend it to him.

The phrase 'on many situations' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in many situations'. Also, 'let them' is incorrect because 'them' is plural and does not agree with 'my closest friend' who is singular. The correct pronoun is 'him'. Additionally, 'let' is not the correct verb here; 'lend' should be used when giving money temporarily. These corrections ensure proper preposition use, pronoun agreement, and verb choice.