金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'a few cash' nên là 'some cash' hoặc 'a little money'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và chi tiết cụ thể. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

範例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others a few times. For example, once I needed some cash urgently to pay for my school supplies. Usually, I borrow money only when it is necessary, and I always make sure to pay it back on time.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ 'beat mean' không rõ nghĩa và 'let the others lend my money' sai cấu trúc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I consider myself a generous person, so I have lent money to others before. For instance, I once lent $50 to a friend who needed help paying for transportation. I believe helping friends in need is important, but I always make sure they will return the money.

× Yes, I have definitely borrowed a few cash from the others.

✓ Yes, I have definitely borrowed a little cash from others.

The word 'cash' is an uncountable noun and cannot be used with 'a few'. Instead, 'a little' should be used to indicate a small amount. Also, 'the others' is incorrect here; 'others' without 'the' is appropriate when referring to people in general.

× Yes, I have definitely borrowed a few cash from the others.

✓ Yes, I have definitely borrowed a little cash from others.

Using 'the others' implies specific people previously mentioned, but here it refers to people in general, so 'others' without 'the' is correct.

× Sometimes it is for necessity, sometimes it is just for Michelle Lears items.

✓ Sometimes it is out of necessity, sometimes it is just for Michelle Lears' items.

The phrase 'for necessity' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'out of necessity'. Also, to show possession, an apostrophe is needed in 'Michelle Lears' items'.

× I may consider myself as a beat mean, but I have definitely let the others lend my money.

✓ I may consider myself a bit mean, but I have definitely let others borrow my money.

'May consider' is acceptable, but 'as a beat mean' is incorrect; it should be 'a bit mean'. Also, 'let the others lend my money' is wrong because 'lend' means to give money; the student means others borrowed money from them, so 'let others borrow my money' is correct.

× I may consider myself as a beat mean, but I have definitely let the others lend my money.

✓ I may consider myself a bit mean, but I have definitely let others borrow my money.

'The others' is incorrect here; 'others' without 'the' is appropriate when referring to people in general.