金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 学生回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“borrow money is very embarrass embarrassing”应为“borrowing money is very embarrassing”。此外，句子结构不够清晰，表达的逻辑关系也不够明确。建议加强语法基础，注意时态和词形变化，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: I've never borrowed money from others because I find it quite embarrassing. However, if I do borrow money and repay it on time, I don't think it will harm our relationship.

建議: 学生回答中时态使用错误，如“lend”应为“lent”，且句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。重复使用“because”且缺少具体细节。建议注意动词时态，避免重复词汇，增加具体细节，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Of course, last month I lent money to my friend, but she couldn't pay me back on time. I felt a bit uncomfortable and embarrassed because lending money can sometimes complicate friendships.

× I think borrow money is very embarrass embarrassing.

✓ I think borrowing money is very embarrassing.

这里“borrow money”作为动名词短语应使用动名词形式“borrowing”，而“embarrass embarrassing”是重复且错误的形容词形式，应改为“embarrassing”。

× But if I can pay it back on time I think it should damage our relationship.

✓ But if I can pay it back on time, I don't think it should damage our relationship.

句中缺少否定词，原句表达与语境不符，应加上“don't”表示否定；另外，条件状语从句后应加逗号。

× last month I lend money to my friends but she can't pay it back on time.

✓ Last month I lent money to my friend but she couldn't pay it back on time.

“last month”表示过去时间，动词应使用过去式“lent”；“friends”应为单数“friend”与代词“she”对应；“can't”应改为过去式“couldn't”。

× because because it is very difficult things.

✓ because it is a very difficult thing.

“things”是复数，但前面用的是单数谓语“is”，应保持单复数一致，改为单数“thing”；且“because”重复，应去掉一个。

× I feel little uncomfortable and embarrassed because because it is very difficult things.

✓ I feel a little uncomfortable and embarrassed because it is a very difficult thing.

“little”作为副词修饰形容词时应加冠词“a little”表示“有点”；“because”重复，应去掉一个。