金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复用词，且句子结构不完整。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持，避免重复和语法错误。

範例: Yes, I borrowed some money from my brother a few months ago because I needed to pay for my house, and I didn't have enough savings at that time.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺少连贯的逻辑。建议先明确回答，然后用具体原因和细节支持，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

範例: Yes, I have lent money to my sister because she was living in poor conditions and her salary was not enough to cover her rent.

× A years, you know, I just borrowed some money from from my brother several months ago because I need to umm, pay the money for the house so I don't have enough money.

✓ A year ago, you know, I just borrowed some money from my brother several months ago because I needed to, umm, pay the money for the house so I didn't have enough money.

这里“years”应为单数“year”，因为指的是一年前的时间点。动词时态也应与时间状语一致，使用过去时。

× Well I decided to ask him to borrow, but I.

✓ Well, I decided to ask him to borrow, but I...

句子末尾不完整，建议补充完整句子。此处无明显语法错误，但应注意句子完整性。

× Yes I did might have lent my money to my sister because she is living a poor conditions and they the her salary was pretty round so she can't affordable all for his rent money.

✓ Yes, I might have lent my money to my sister because she was living in poor conditions and her salary was pretty low, so she couldn't afford all of her rent money.

动词时态应统一为过去时，描述过去的情况。"living a poor conditions"应改为"living in poor conditions"，介词使用错误。"can't affordable"应为"couldn't afford"，动词形式和时态错误。人称代词使用不当，应统一指代妹妹。