金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答较为自然，但句子结构较复杂且有些冗长，导致表达不够简洁明了。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连接词使内容更连贯，同时补充具体细节。

範例: I usually don't borrow money from others because in Chinese culture, discussing personal finances is considered inappropriate. However, in urgent situations like accidents, I might ask for help.

建議: 回答内容较丰富，但存在语法和表达不够流畅的问题。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的时态和句式，并用连接词使回答更连贯，同时提供更具体的例子。

範例: Yes, I sometimes lend money to my cousins when they face financial difficulties. For example, last month, one of them needed help to pay for urgent medical bills, and I was happy to support him. They usually repay me on time, so it is not a big problem.

× it is not very suggested to talk about financial matters of yourself with other people

✓ it is not very suggested to talk about your financial matters with other people

这里“financial matters of yourself”用法不正确，应该用“your financial matters”来表达“你的财务问题”，更符合英语习惯。

× Unfortunately, when the need is so urgent, such as an accident occurs.

✓ Unfortunately, when the need is so urgent, such as when an accident occurs.

原句缺少连接词“when”，导致句子结构不完整，应该补充“when”使句子完整。

× Well, from time to time, yes I do.

✓ Well, from time to time, yes I do.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× I may find the problems of lacking money and they would ask me for help.

✓ I may find the problem of lacking money and they would ask me for help.

“problems”应为单数“problem”，因为这里指的是“缺钱的问题”整体，而非多个不同的问题。

× It would be natural for me to, uh, to respond to their call and give them the financial support they need.

✓ It would be natural for me to respond to their call and give them the financial support they need.

“to”重复使用不必要，去掉第二个“to”使句子更流畅。

× And they usually can pay the debt in time, so it's not really a big issue for me.

✓ And they usually can pay the debt on time, so it's not really a big issue for me.

“in time”通常表示及时赶到，表达“按时还款”应使用“on time”。