金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use correct verb forms. Also, explain briefly why you borrowed money and how you managed repayment, using linking words to connect ideas logically. Keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I have borrowed money a couple of times from my friends, family, and banks. I always make sure to repay the money on time because I understand the importance of maintaining good financial relationships.

建議: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition and filler words. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to explain your feelings and experiences. Also, express your opinion clearly and politely.

範例: Yes, I have lent money to friends and other families a few times. However, they did not repay me on time, which made me reluctant to lend money again. Therefore, I prefer not to lend money unless it is necessary, as I believe people should respect such trust.

× I have borrowed money couple of times from my friends, from family and also I have, uh, got from, uh, a few institutions like bank and also have repaired it, uh, on time because it is affecting the civil school, uh, due to that I have done it, uh, properly on every time.

✓ I have borrowed money a couple of times from my friends, from family and also I have, uh, got it from, uh, a few institutions like banks and also have repaid it, uh, on time because it is affecting the civil score, uh, due to that I have done it, uh, properly every time.

The phrase 'couple of times' requires the article 'a' before 'couple'. 'Bank' should be plural as 'banks' when referring to multiple institutions. 'Repaired' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'repaid' when referring to paying back money. 'On every time' is incorrect; it should be 'every time'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I have lend money couple of times to my friends, to other families, but uh, I did not get my money on proper time.

✓ Yes, I have lent money a couple of times to my friends, to other families, but uh, I did not get my money at the proper time.

The verb 'lend' in present tense should be in past participle form 'lent' after 'have'. Also, 'couple of times' needs the article 'a' before 'couple'. The phrase 'on proper time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at the proper time'. These changes correct verb form and preposition usage.

× Uh, so due to that, I was not able to willing to give people money next time.

✓ Uh, so due to that, I was not willing to give people money next time.

The phrase 'was not able to willing' is incorrect. 'Able to' and 'willing to' are separate modal expressions and should not be combined. The correct form is 'was not willing to'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I am never willing to give money, uh, for, uh, any free, of course, because people don't respect.

✓ I am never willing to give money, uh, for free, of course, because people don't respect.

The phrase 'for any free' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'for free' when indicating giving something without payment. Removing 'any' corrects the prepositional phrase.