金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để trở nên tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành cho kinh nghiệm trong quá khứ và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I ever borrow' nên là 'I have borrowed'. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I have borrowed money from banks before because I didn't have enough money to buy some essentials. However, I have already repaid all the money I borrowed.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc trong câu trả lời. Hãy tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như 'uh' và sắp xếp câu sao cho có chủ đề rõ ràng. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I have lent money to my younger brother because he needed some funds to showcase his work at an exhibition.

× Yes, I ever borrow money from banks because they're not enough money to buy east and now I pays all money what I borrow the bank.

✓ Yes, I have borrowed money from banks because they didn't have enough money to buy food and now I have paid back all the money I borrowed from the bank.

The student incorrectly used 'ever borrow' instead of the present perfect 'have borrowed' to indicate past experience. 'They're not enough money' is incorrect; it should be 'they didn't have enough money' to match past tense and subject-verb agreement. 'Pays' should be 'have paid' to correctly use present perfect tense for completed action. 'What I borrow the bank' is incorrect; it should be 'I borrowed from the bank' to correctly use past tense and preposition. Suggestions: Use present perfect 'have borrowed' for past experiences, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use correct prepositions and verb forms.

× Yes, I have. I have less money to, uh, my uh, brother, to my younger brother because he needs money to, uh, to shows, uh, his work.

✓ Yes, I have. I have lent money to my younger brother because he needs money to show his work.

The phrase 'I have less money to, uh, my uh, brother' is incorrect; it should be 'I have lent money to my younger brother' to correctly express the action. 'To shows' is incorrect; the verb should be in base form 'to show' after 'to'. Suggestions: Use the correct verb 'lent' for past action, and use base form of verb after 'to'.