金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“am borrow”应为“borrowed”，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态一致性，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。可以简洁明了地说明借钱的情况，并用具体例子支持。

範例: Yes, I have borrowed money a few times, usually from my parents or close friends. For instance, I once borrowed some money from my mother to buy a book I really wanted. She lent me the money, and I was able to purchase it.

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“I'm have”应为“I have”，以及表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的时态和语法，表达要简洁明了，避免模糊和不相关的内容。可以具体说明借钱的情况和结果。

範例: Yes, I have lent money to others before. For example, one of my best friends needed money to buy something important, so I helped by lending him some. Thanks to that, he was able to get what he wanted.

× I am borrow money from my mum to buy a book that I show a strong willingness to want.

✓ I borrowed money from my mum to buy a book that I really wanted.

这里使用了错误的动词形式“am borrow”，正确的应该是过去式“borrowed”，因为句子描述的是过去发生的事情。动词现在分词形式不能用作谓语动词。

× Then she borrowed me some and I buy it.

✓ Then she lent me some and I bought it.

“borrowed me some”用法错误，应该用“lent me some”，因为是别人借钱给我。动词时态也应保持一致，改为过去式“bought”。

× Yes, I'm have this experience before.

✓ Yes, I have had this experience before.

“I'm have”是错误的表达，正确的应该是现在完成时“have had”，表示过去发生并对现在有影响的经历。

× one of my best friends don't have enough money to buy something that they want.

✓ one of my best friends doesn't have enough money to buy something that they want.

主语是“one”，单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“doesn't”，而不是复数“don't”。

× I always give a helping hand to them and finally they're successful by their sins.

✓ I always give them a helping hand and finally they succeed in their goals.

原句结构混乱，“successful by their sins”表达不清且语法错误，改为“they succeed in their goals”更符合语境且语法正确。