金钱— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然、语法正确并且结构清晰。先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体细节支持，使用连词使句子更连贯。注意时态一致（过去发生的事用过去时），避免重复词语。可以补充借钱的原因、借了多少或者如何还款等细节。

範例: Yes, I have. Right after I graduated, I didn’t have enough money to cover my living costs, so I asked a close friend to lend me some cash. Fortunately, they agreed and helped me for a few months, and I managed to repay them once I started working.

建議: 回答应更简洁并使用正确时态和更多细节。先直接肯定或否定，再说明对象、原因、金额或还款情况，并用连接词保证流畅。避免重复词和口头停顿，改用更自然的表达。

範例: Yes, I have lent money to my younger brothers. A few years ago they needed help to pay for university fees, so I lent each of them a modest amount and they repaid me within a year.

× Yes, when I just graduated from school I don't have money to live so I asked friend to lend me some money and they they really did and I feel grateful for that.

✓ Yes. When I had just graduated from school I didn't have any money to live on, so I asked a friend to lend me some money. They did, and I was very grateful for that.

问题类型：现在时／过去时混用（属于“Present tense issue”及“Past tense issue”的交叉，但主要为时态使用不当）。错误在于句子开头用过去时“graduated”，随后却用现在时“don't have”来描述当时的情况，导致时态不一致；此外缺少冠词“a friend”，以及“have money to live”搭配不自然，通常说“have money to live on”或“have any money”。建议：把整句话统一为过去时，保持时态一致。使用适当的冠词（a friend），并用常见搭配“have money to live on”。最后把感受用过去时“was grateful”。（简明建议：把现在时改为过去时，补冠词，使用标准短语。）

× Yes, my brothers, my younger brothers, they, they borrowed money from me and as as their elder sister, I just lend them some money. And years ago it happened.

✓ Yes. My younger brothers borrowed money from me, and as their elder sister I lent them some money years ago.

问题类型：时态使用不当（Present tense issue）及动词形式错误（应该为过去式）。句中“lend”是现在式，与上下文“borrowed”及“years ago”指向过去时不一致，正确应使用过去式“lent”。另外有重复词汇“they, they”和多余停顿，需删去以使句子流畅。建议：统一使用过去时，把“lend”改为“lent”，删除重复词，合并短句以简洁表达。