应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains informal expressions like "'cause" and fragmented sentences such as "True. Social media." To improve, try to give a clear and complete sentence directly answering the question, avoid informal contractions, and provide a reason or example to support your answer. Also, keep your response concise and natural.

範例: Recently, I have used social media apps like Instagram and Snapchat because I enjoy staying connected with my friends and sharing updates.

建議: Your answer lacks coherence and contains incomplete sentences and informal language such as "'cause". To improve, respond with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Provide specific reasons why you like these apps and avoid sentence fragments.

範例: I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram and Snapchat because I can keep in touch with my friends and follow inspiring influencers who motivate me and keep me updated on current trends.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains sentence fragments and lacks smooth linking. To improve, use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific about how advertisements influence your choice.

範例: I usually discover new apps through advertisements on social media platforms like Instagram, which catch my attention and encourage me to download and try them out.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains a sentence fragment starting with "Because". To improve, combine your ideas into complete sentences using linking words to enhance coherence. Also, provide specific reasons for your preferences.

範例: In the future, I would like to use more social media apps like TikTok and Instagram to create reels and socialize with my friends, especially since I have friends living far away and these apps help me stay connected easily.

× The 'cause I was talking to my friends.

✓ Because I was talking to my friends.

The phrase 'The 'cause' is an informal and incorrect contraction. It should be replaced with 'Because' to form a proper sentence structure.

× True.

'True.' is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. It should be omitted or connected properly to the previous or next sentence.

× I often like to use Instagram or Snapchat in my daily life, but 'cause I have my friends in it and I.

✓ I often like to use Instagram or Snapchat in my daily life because I have my friends on it.

The phrase 'but 'cause' is informal and the sentence is incomplete ending with 'and I.' It should be corrected to a complete sentence using 'because' and removing the incomplete part.

× Follow a quiet. Influencers.

✓ I follow quiet influencers.

The original is fragmented and lacks a subject and verb. It should be combined into a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× To be motivated by them and to follow current trends.

✓ I follow them to be motivated and to keep up with current trends.

The original is a fragment without a subject. It should be rewritten as a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× I find out different apps through social media because I have seen advertisements on Instagram about. Apps and I wanted to try so I download it and try.

✓ I find out about different apps through social media because I have seen advertisements on Instagram about apps, and I wanted to try them, so I downloaded and tried them.

The phrase 'find out different apps' is incorrect; it should be 'find out about different apps'. Also, 'download it and try those apps' is inconsistent; 'them' should be used for plural apps, and past tense 'downloaded' and 'tried' should be used to match the past action.

× so I download it and try. Those apps.

✓ so I downloaded them and tried those apps.

The actions happened in the past, so past tense verbs 'downloaded' and 'tried' should be used instead of present tense.

× Because I have long distance friends so I can interact with them easily through social media.

✓ I have long-distance friends, so I can interact with them easily through social media.

The sentence starts with 'Because' and also uses 'so', which is redundant and incorrect. It should be restructured to avoid starting with 'Because' and to use 'so' properly.