应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý sử dụng số nhiều đúng cách (ví dụ: "food pages" thay vì "food page") và tránh lặp từ như "for a lot". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Recently, I have been using Instagram and Google Maps a lot. Instagram helps me stay connected with my friends around the world and also allows me to follow some inspiring travel and food pages. Moreover, Google Maps is very useful when I visit new areas, especially to find coffee shops or bus routes.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "learning up" hay câu không hoàn chỉnh như "Live school since I love taking photos". Hãy cố gắng trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: I am mainly interested in social media and educational apps. For example, I like Duolingo and Quizlet because they make learning languages more fun and convenient. Besides that, I also enjoy apps related to photography and photo editing since I love taking pictures.

建議: Bạn cần luyện tập nói trôi chảy hơn để tránh lặp lại các từ "uh" và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "in the Facebook" nên là "on Facebook".

範例: Sometimes, I use the App Store on my phone to find different apps. Also, I discover new apps while playing games or watching videos on Facebook.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi như "I'd like to some drive some finance" hay "a good getting up". Hãy nói rõ ràng, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để ý tưởng được truyền đạt hiệu quả.

範例: In the future, I'd like to use some finance and productivity apps such as Money Lover. I believe they can help me organize my time better and manage my spending more effectively, especially when I start working or studying abroad.

× Recently I have been using Instagram and Google Map for a lot.

✓ Recently I have been using Instagram and Google Maps a lot.

The phrase 'for a lot' is incorrect here; the correct expression is 'a lot' to indicate frequency or amount. Also, the app name is 'Google Maps', not 'Google Map'.

× Instagram helped me stay connected with my friends from around the world and also follow some inspiring travel and food page.

✓ Instagram helped me stay connected with my friends from around the world and also follow some inspiring travel and food pages.

The word 'page' should be plural 'pages' because it refers to multiple travel and food pages, not just one.

× Google Maps is super useful when I go out in a new area, especially to find coffee or bus routes.

✓ Google Maps is super useful when I go out in a new area, especially to find coffee shops or bus routes.

The word 'coffee' should be 'coffee shops' to correctly refer to places where coffee is available, not the drink itself.

× I am merely interested in social media and learning up.

✓ I am mainly interested in social media and learning.

The word 'merely' is not appropriate here; 'mainly' fits better to express primary interest. Also, 'learning up' is incorrect; it should be 'learning' or 'learning apps' depending on context.

× I like Duolingo or Quizlet because they make study language more fun and convenient.

✓ I like Duolingo and Quizlet because they make studying languages more fun and convenient.

The phrase 'make study language' is incorrect; it should be 'make studying languages' to use the gerund form and plural noun correctly.

× Yeah, I also enjoy arts related to photography and editing.

✓ Yeah, I also enjoy art related to photography and editing.

The word 'arts' is incorrect here; 'art' is uncountable and should be singular when referring to the field or subject.

× Live school since I love taking photos.

✓ I live close to school since I love taking photos.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Assuming the intended meaning is about living near school, the corrected sentence clarifies this.

× Uh, sometime I use the, uh, App Store in my, uh, my phone to find the different uh, and also sometimes in the, uh, another app like uh, when I play a game or when I watch the video in the Facebook.

✓ Uh, sometimes I use the App Store on my phone to find different apps, and also sometimes in another app, like when I play a game or watch videos on Facebook.

Corrected 'sometime' to 'sometimes' for frequency, 'in my phone' to 'on my phone' for correct preposition, added 'apps' after 'different' for clarity, and corrected 'the video in the Facebook' to 'videos on Facebook'.

× In the future, I'd like to some drive some finance and productivity apps such as Nonsense or a good getting up like Money Lover.

✓ In the future, I'd like to use some finance and productivity apps such as Nonsense or a good one like Money Lover.

The phrase 'like to some drive some' is incorrect; it should be 'like to use some'. Also, 'a good getting up' is incorrect; 'a good one' is appropriate here.

× I think they could help me to organize my time better and manage my spending more effectively, especially when I starting work I start working or studying abroad.

✓ I think they could help me organize my time better and manage my spending more effectively, especially when I start working or studying abroad.

Removed unnecessary 'to' after 'help me', corrected 'when I starting work I start working' to 'when I start working' for proper tense and clarity.