应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、内容も曖昧です。例えば「unsuitable people」という表現は意味が通じません。より自然で明確な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

範例: I recently used the dating app Tinder, which is very popular in the US. I found its interface easy to use for meeting new people.

建議: 文法ミスがあり、内容が不明瞭です。例えば「I usually interested」ではなく「I am usually interested」が正しいです。また、理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

範例: I am usually interested in gaming apps, especially sports games like rugby and baseball, because I enjoy watching these sports.

建議: 文法的な誤りがあり、表現が不自然です。例えば「asked some advice on her」ではなく「asked her for some advice」が正しいです。接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。

範例: I usually learn about different apps from other people, TV programs, or chatting. For example, I asked my wife for advice yesterday because she knows a lot about smartphone apps.

建議: 表現が不自然で文法的な誤りがあります。「Taking Note apps」ではなく「note-taking apps」が正しいです。また、理由を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

範例: I would like to use note-taking apps in the future because I am not good at organizing meetings and schedules. For example, apps like Evernote can help me take notes efficiently.

× I recently used the dating app named Tinder and that was a very popular especially among the US people to meet unsuitable people to meet with.

✓ I recently used the dating app named Tinder, and it was very popular especially among US people to meet suitable people to meet with.

The definite article 'the' before 'US people' is unnecessary because 'US people' is a general group. Also, 'unsuitable' is likely a mistake for 'suitable' in this context. The sentence also needs a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.

× I recently used the dating app named Tinder and that was a very popular especially among the US people to meet unsuitable people to meet with.

✓ I recently used the dating app named Tinder, and it was very popular especially among US people to meet suitable people.

The phrase 'people to meet with' is redundant; 'people to meet' is sufficient. Also, 'among the US people' should be 'among US people' without 'the'.

× I thought the interface was very useful to find a new one.

✓ I thought the interface was very useful for finding a new one.

The phrase 'useful to find' is less natural than 'useful for finding'. The preposition 'for' is needed before the gerund 'finding'.

× I usually interested in gaming apps, especially sports games such as rugby or baseball, because I'm enthusiastic at watching these two sports and I see many types of apps, but it's difficult to find out.

✓ I am usually interested in gaming apps, especially sports games such as rugby or baseball, because I'm enthusiastic about watching these two sports. I see many types of apps, but it's difficult to find the right ones.

The verb 'am' is missing after 'I' to form the present tense 'I am usually interested'. The preposition 'at' should be 'about' after 'enthusiastic'. The phrase 'difficult to find out' is incorrect; it should be 'difficult to find the right ones'.

× I usually hear the information from other people, from TV programs or chatting for example.

✓ I usually get information from other people, from TV programs, or from chatting, for example.

The verb 'hear' is not appropriate for receiving information in this context; 'get' is better. Also, 'from chatting' needs the preposition 'from' to be consistent. Commas are added for clarity.

× My wife has a lot of knowledge about smartphone apps, so I asked some advice on her yesterday.

✓ My wife has a lot of knowledge about smartphone apps, so I asked her for some advice yesterday.

The phrase 'asked some advice on her' is incorrect. The correct form is 'asked her for some advice'. The preposition 'for' is needed, and 'on her' is incorrect.

× I would like to install Taking Note apps because I'm not good at arranging the meeting and their schedule.

✓ I would like to install note-taking apps because I'm not good at arranging meetings and their schedules.

'Taking Note apps' is incorrect; the correct term is 'note-taking apps'. Also, 'the meeting' should be plural 'meetings' to generalize, and 'their schedule' should be 'their schedules' to match plural meetings.

× So I heard the story there about such apps like Evernote which helps me to note the.

✓ So I heard about apps like Evernote, which help me take notes.

The phrase 'heard the story there about such apps like Evernote' is awkward; 'heard about apps like Evernote' is better. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'apps'. 'To note the' is incomplete; 'take notes' is the correct expression.