应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は少し冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。質問に直接答え、具体的なアプリ名や使用理由を明確に述べることが重要です。また、文を簡潔にし、論理的なつながりを持たせるために接続詞を使いましょう。

範例: Recently, I have been using Google Maps because Tokyo's geography is quite complicated. It helps me navigate the city easily and meet my friends without getting lost.

建議: 文法の誤りがあり、表現が不自然です。質問に対して直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然な流れを作りましょう。

範例: I am usually interested in video game apps, such as shooting and puzzle games, because I spend a lot of time on the train when I go to university, and these games help me pass the time.

建議: 表現が不自然で、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。質問に対して明確に答え、具体的な例を挙げて説明しましょう。また、文法の改善と接続詞の使用で流れを良くしてください。

範例: I usually discover new apps through my friends' recommendations. For example, my friends suggested an app called Be Real, which I now use regularly.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。質問に対して直接答え、具体的なアプリ名と使用目的を明確に述べましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、自然な表現を心がけてください。

範例: In the future, I would like to use social media apps like Instagram or X because I want to share moments from my daily life with my friends.

× I use the navigation map to come to here, so it is essential thing for me to get along with friends because the Tokyo geography of Tokyo is especially complicated compared to alongside Japan.

✓ I use the navigation map to come here, so it is an essential thing for me to get along with friends because the geography of Tokyo is especially complicated compared to other parts of Japan.

The phrase 'come to here' is incorrect; 'come here' is the correct form. 'Essential thing' requires the article 'an' before it. 'The Tokyo geography of Tokyo' is redundant; 'the geography of Tokyo' suffices. 'Compared to alongside Japan' is incorrect; 'compared to other parts of Japan' is appropriate.

× I usually interested in the video games like shooting games or puzzle games that that are able to play with the smart phones.

✓ I am usually interested in video games like shooting games or puzzle games that can be played on smartphones.

The verb 'interested' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present tense. 'The video games' should be 'video games' as a general statement. 'That that are able to play with the smart phones' is awkward; 'that can be played on smartphones' is correct.

× I have to get on the train when I go to the university so I need pastime by using the smartphones.

✓ I have to get on the train when I go to university, so I need a pastime using my smartphone.

'Go to the university' is better as 'go to university' in general statements. 'Pastime by using the smartphones' is awkward; 'a pastime using my smartphone' is clearer. 'Smartphones' should be singular possessive 'my smartphone'.

× I always find delivering apps by the recommendation of my friends.

✓ I always find delivery apps through the recommendation of my friends.

'Delivering apps' is incorrect; 'delivery apps' is the correct term. 'By the recommendation' should be 'through the recommendation' to indicate the source.

× For example, the apps called Be Real is my suggestion from my friends.

✓ For example, the app called Be Real was suggested to me by my friends.

'Apps' is plural but 'is' is singular; 'app' singular matches 'is'. 'My suggestion from my friends' is incorrect; 'was suggested to me by my friends' is correct.

× I always find apps like so.

✓ I always find apps like that.

'Like so' is informal and unclear; 'like that' is the correct expression.

× I will use the apps that are able to share my real like Instagram or XI want to share about my moments that happened around me in my daily life.

✓ I will use apps that allow me to share my real life, like Instagram, or X. I want to share moments that happen around me in my daily life.

'Are able to share' is awkward; 'allow me to share' is better. 'My real like' should be 'my real life'. 'XI' seems a typo for 'X'. 'Moments that happened' should be 'moments that happen' to match the future intention.

× So I will use that kind of apps in the future.

✓ So I will use that kind of app in the future.

'That kind of' is followed by singular noun; 'app' is singular, not 'apps'.