应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan kalimat topik, lalu berikan detail pendukung secara singkat dan teratur. Hindari pengulangan dan kata-kata yang tidak perlu.

範例: Recently, I have used the IELTS Speaking practice app to improve my English skills. I also use WhatsApp to chat with my friends and family.

建議: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dengan kalimat utama yang jelas dan detail pendukung yang spesifik. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan hindari kesalahan tata bahasa.

範例: I am usually interested in apps that help me develop my skills, such as the IELTS Speaking app to improve my English. Additionally, I use social media apps like WhatsApp to stay connected with others.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan susunan kalimat agar lebih jelas dan mudah dipahami. Gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan detail yang spesifik dan hindari kalimat yang berbelit-belit.

範例: I usually discover new apps by browsing social media platforms. For example, I found the IELTS Speaking app through social media, and I decided to try it because it helps me improve my English.

建議: Susun kalimat dengan struktur yang lebih baik dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat. Jelaskan dengan spesifik jenis aplikasi yang diinginkan dan alasan mengapa aplikasi tersebut penting.

範例: In the future, I would like to use apps that help introverted people develop skills such as public speaking and language learning, so they can gain confidence and communicate better with others.

× I use this app. IELTS speaking, eh? Yeah, IELTS speaking practice and a chativity Gemini WhatsApp. Yeah, those apps I have recently used.

✓ I have used these apps recently: IELTS Speaking practice and Chativity Gemini WhatsApp.

The original sentence mixes present simple 'I use' with past tense 'I have recently used' incorrectly. Since the question asks about recent use, present perfect tense 'I have used' is appropriate. Also, 'this app' should be plural 'these apps' to match the list. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× That app that can make me develop and grow, such as this app IELTS speaking so that I can improve my English speaking skills and the app that I used to connect with other people like social media, like WhatsApp. So yeah, that kind of app that I interested in.

✓ Apps that can help me develop and grow, such as the IELTS Speaking app so that I can improve my English speaking skills, and apps that I use to connect with other people, like social media apps such as WhatsApp. So yeah, those kinds of apps interest me.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and verb forms, e.g., 'that I used to connect' should be 'that I use to connect' (present tense), and 'that I interested in' should be 'that interest me'. Also, 'such as this app IELTS speaking' needs an article 'the' before 'IELTS Speaking app'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition and verb usage.

× I usually since I'm a Genesee who are like to scroll media social so that I found a new app from that I found like I found you I in that social media and I think it's very interesting app and it can make me improve my English speaking skills. So why not? I'm trying.

✓ Usually, since I'm a Gen Z who likes to scroll through social media, I find new apps there. I found you on social media, and I think it's a very interesting app that can help me improve my English speaking skills. So why not? I'm trying it.

The original sentence is confusing and has multiple grammar errors: 'Genesee' should be 'Gen Z', 'who are like' should be 'who likes', 'scroll media social' should be 'scroll through social media', and verb tenses are inconsistent. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct grammar.

× The app that provide any introverted person in the world have to grow and develop their skills like public speaking and English speaking skills or any language speaking skills so that they are not afraid to against the world I think.

✓ An app that provides any introverted person in the world with opportunities to grow and develop their skills, like public speaking, English speaking, or any language skills, so that they are not afraid to face the world, I think.

The original sentence has quantifier and article errors: 'The app that provide' should be 'An app that provides', and 'have to grow' should be 'with opportunities to grow'. Also, 'afraid to against the world' is incorrect; it should be 'afraid to face the world'. The sentence is corrected for proper quantifier, article use, and prepositions.