应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda cümlə quruluşu və ifadələrdə qarışıqlıq var. Daha aydın və qısa cümlələr qurmağa çalışın, mövzuya birbaşa cavab verin və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

範例: Recently, I have used Instagram, WhatsApp, Google, and YouTube. I also tried an app called Chatty Beauty to improve my speaking skills. When someone messages me, I usually reply through WhatsApp or Instagram.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlamalar və qeyri-dəqiqliklər var. Daha təbii və axıcı ifadələr istifadə edin, fikirlərinizi dəstəkləyən əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

範例: I am mostly interested in apps that help me improve my English and personal development. For example, I use YouTube and ChatGPT because they provide useful resources for learning and self-improvement.

建議: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün mövzu cümləsi ilə başlayın və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

範例: I usually discover new apps through Instagram, where bloggers recommend useful applications. Sometimes, I also find apps by watching videos on YouTube that explain their features.

建議: Cavabınızda fikirlər qarışıqdır və cümlə quruluşu zəifdir. Daha konkret və aydın cavab verin, mövzunu dəstəkləyən nümunələr və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

範例: In the future, I would like to use shopping apps that help me buy clothes easily. Since there are many apps available now, I don't feel the need for new ones, but a reliable shopping app would be useful.

× Nowadays you know that there are so many kind of kinds of apps, that's why actually I don't need anything anymore.

✓ Nowadays you know that there are so many kinds of apps, that's why actually I don't need anything anymore.

The phrase 'so many kind of kinds of apps' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized as 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. The correct phrase is 'so many kinds of apps'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Recently I used chatty beauty for improving my speaking and I also when I'm when I see someone text message me I use WhatsApp or Instagram if I.

✓ Recently I used Chatty Beauty to improve my speaking, and also when I see someone text message me, I use WhatsApp or Instagram.

The phrase 'for improving my speaking' should be 'to improve my speaking' because 'to' + base verb is used to express purpose. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear; it was corrected for clarity and grammar. The error relates to incorrect verb form usage (present participle instead of infinitive).

× I find all different apps from different place.

✓ I find all different apps from different places.

The word 'place' should be pluralized to 'places' because 'different' implies multiple locations. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and pluralization.

× Maybe I meet on the Instagram because some bloggers recommend me this app for for example improving yourself or maybe getting information in easier form.

✓ Maybe I find them on Instagram because some bloggers recommend this app, for example, for improving yourself or maybe getting information in an easier form.

The phrase 'meet on the Instagram' is incorrect; 'meet' is not used for apps or content. 'Find them on Instagram' is more appropriate. Also, 'recommend me this app' should be 'recommend this app to me'. Prepositions and verb usage were corrected.

× Maybe just I can see on the YouTube also.

✓ Maybe I can also see it on YouTube.

The sentence structure is awkward and the pronoun usage is incorrect. 'Maybe just I can see on the YouTube also' should be 'Maybe I can also see it on YouTube.' Pronoun and adverb placement were corrected.

× But if I would like to use in the future any app, I would choose buying something that it is the form, for example, if I want this clothes.

✓ But if I would like to use any app in the future, I would choose one for buying something, for example, if I want these clothes.

The phrase 'use in the future any app' should be 'use any app in the future' for correct word order. 'This clothes' is incorrect; 'these clothes' is correct because 'clothes' is plural. Also, 'that it is the form' is unclear and corrected to 'one for buying something'. Prepositions and demonstrative pronouns were corrected.