应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific details. Avoid unclear phrases like 'it's like a me show'. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid grammatical errors.

範例: Recently, I have used several apps daily. The last app I tried was the K Card shopping app, which allows me to purchase various items conveniently online.

建議: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples with linking words. Avoid vague or incomplete sentences.

範例: I am usually interested in entertainment and educational apps. For example, I frequently use YouTube for videos and Wikipedia for information. However, I spend most of my time playing games on a BGM gaming app, which I find very engaging.

建議: Your answer should be more precise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, clarify your points with specific details.

範例: I find different apps in several ways. For instance, my friends often recommend useful apps. Additionally, I explore the Play Store, which is very popular in my country, to discover and download new apps easily.

建議: Your answer should be more fluent and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain your reasons with linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like 'I am more attractive to buy'.

範例: In the future, I would like to use shopping apps, especially those that make buying clothes easier. Since I enjoy shopping for new clothes, a convenient app would help me save time and effort.

× There are lot of apps that I used on my daily basis.

✓ There are lots of apps that I use on my daily basis.

The phrase 'lot of' should be 'lots of' to correctly indicate plural countable nouns. Also, 'used' should be 'use' to match the present habitual action indicated by 'on my daily basis'.

× The last time I used a new shopping app that is also known as K card app and it is about to purchase new things from and it's like a me show.

✓ The last time I used a new shopping app, which is also known as the K Card app, and it is for purchasing new things, and it's like a me show.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrasing. 'About to purchase new things from' is incorrect; it should be 'for purchasing new things'. Also, 'like a me show' is unclear but kept as is since it may be a specific reference. Added commas and 'which' for clarity.

× There are various app in I usually interested in such as YouTube, wikipedia.com website that I frequently visit, but I mostly use a BGM application that is gaming application and I spend my mostly time to play this game that enhance.

✓ There are various apps that I am usually interested in, such as YouTube and the Wikipedia website that I frequently visit, but I mostly use a BGM application, which is a gaming application, and I spend most of my time playing this game that enhances me.

'App' should be plural 'apps' to match 'various'. 'In I usually interested' is incorrect; it should be 'that I am usually interested in'. 'Wikipedia.com website' should be 'the Wikipedia website'. 'Mostly time' should be 'most of my time'. 'To play' should be 'playing' to correctly follow 'spend time'. Added commas and corrected sentence structure for clarity.

× Sometimes it's suggested by my friends and there is a app that popular in my country is known as a Play store.

✓ Sometimes apps are suggested by my friends, and there is an app that is popular in my country known as the Play Store.

'There is a app' is incorrect; it should be 'there is an app' because 'app' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'a app that popular' should be 'an app that is popular'. Added 'are' to 'apps are suggested' for correct passive voice and plural agreement.

× There are lot of apps available, you only need to press the download icon to enjoy and to.

✓ There are lots of apps available; you only need to press the download icon to enjoy them.

'Lot of' should be 'lots of' for plural countable nouns. The sentence was incomplete; added 'them' to complete the meaning. Also, replaced comma with semicolon for correct sentence separation.

× If I talk about the future apps, it would be the related with the shopping app.

✓ If I talk about future apps, they would be related to shopping apps.

'It would be the related with' is incorrect modal and preposition usage. 'They would be related to' is correct. Also, 'future apps' is plural, so 'they' is used instead of 'it'.

× I mean, I am more attractive to buy new clothes after some time.

✓ I mean, I am more interested in buying new clothes after some time.

'More attractive to buy' is incorrect; 'attractive' describes a person, not interest. The correct phrase is 'more interested in buying' to express desire or preference.

× That's why I think I would like to use a shopping app in my future that is convenient for me.

✓ That's why I think I would like to use a shopping app in the future that is convenient for me.

'In my future' is unnatural; the correct phrase is 'in the future'. The rest of the sentence is correct.