应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“an AI research”应为“an AI research app”或“an AI-based app”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化表达，避免重复和口头语“umm”，并且补充更具体的细节。

範例: Recently, I often use an app called Deep Sleep, which is an AI-based tool that helps people find various types of information. For example, it can recommend the best transportation routes. The app is free and very useful.

建議: 回答中有较多口头语“umm”，表达不够流畅自然。句子结构较为简单，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议减少口头语，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并且丰富细节描述。

範例: I usually prefer photo editing apps because I enjoy taking pictures of interesting buildings and beautiful objects in my daily life. When I edit photos, I like to add cute stickers to make them more attractive and fun.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，如“talk me some new apps”应为“tell me about some new apps”，且表达不够清晰自然。建议注意语法准确性，避免口头语，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Most of the time, my friends tell me about new apps they find on the Internet because they are interested in new things. They often share this information with me. Besides that, I also discover new apps by browsing app stores.

建議: 回答中有语法错误，如“helps for my job”应为“helps with my job”，且“informations”应为“information”。表达较为重复，建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构。

範例: In the future, I would like to use more AI search apps because they help me organize information efficiently. They are especially useful when I have difficult tasks or complex projects to complete.

× Recently I often use the app called Deep Sleep, which is an AI research for people to find all kinds of information.

✓ Recently I have often used the app called Deep Sleep, which is an AI research tool for people to find all kinds of information.

句子中描述的是最近发生的动作，应该使用现在完成时表示最近的经历或动作。这里用一般现在时不合适。

× which is an AI research for people to find all kinds of information.

✓ which is an AI research tool for people to find all kinds of information.

research是不可数名词，不能直接用作工具名词，需加上tool表示工具。

× it can help you to organize all kinds of informations.

✓ it can help you to organize all kinds of information.

information是不可数名词，不能加复数-s。

× Most of the time my friends will talk me some new apps on the Internet because they are interested in everything and especially the new things.

✓ Most of the time my friends will tell me about some new apps on the Internet because they are interested in everything and especially the new things.

动词tell后面需要加间接宾语和介词about来引出内容，不能直接用talk me。

× So when they have some news for that they will share with me.

✓ So when they have some news about that, they will share it with me.

news是不可数名词，不能用复数代词they指代，应该用it。并且介词用about更合适。

× Besides, I could you know, find some new apps on the app markets.

✓ Besides, I could, you know, find some new apps on the app markets.

插入语you know前后应加逗号，保持句子结构清晰。

× I would like to use more AI search apps in the future, mainly because it really helps for my job and it can help you to organize all kinds of informations.

✓ I would like to use more AI search apps in the future, mainly because they really help with my job and can help me to organize all kinds of information.

apps为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式help；informations错误，information为不可数名词。

× it can help you to organize all kinds of informations.

✓ it can help me to organize all kinds of information.

前文主语是I，后文应保持人称一致，使用me而非you。