应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答内容较为简单，语法和用词存在错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: I have recently used Instagram because it offers various functions. For example, I can text my friends and watch short, entertaining videos. Additionally, I enjoy posting pictures on my account, which helps boost my confidence.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够清晰的问题，且句子较长且缺少适当的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，并注意时态和词汇的准确性。

範例: I am usually interested in social media apps because I enjoy sharing my life. For instance, when I visit coffee shops, I like to take beautiful photos and post them on Instagram. I also enjoy watching exotic videos and making fun videos with my friends.

建議: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议使用更简洁的句子，注意语法和逻辑顺序，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I usually discover new apps through advertisements. Nowadays, many apps, such as games or health-related apps like Redbook, are promoted widely. If I find an app interesting, I will look for more details about it.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议明确表达目标，使用正确的时态和连接词，使句子更自然流畅。

範例: In the future, I would like to use planning apps because my goal is to become a professional academic. Therefore, I need to prepare for various exams and make detailed study plans.

× I think it's Instagram because Instagram have different functions, for example like texting with my friends and watch some short videos which is fun.

✓ I think it's Instagram because Instagram has different functions, for example texting with my friends and watching some short videos which are fun.

主语Instagram是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"has"，而不是复数形式"have"。此外，"watch"应改为动名词形式"watching"，与前面的"texting"保持一致。"videos which is fun"中的"is"应改为复数形式"are"，因为videos是复数。

× Therefore an Instagram can make me become more confident.

✓ Therefore Instagram can make me become more confident.

"Instagram"是专有名词，不需要冠词"an"。使用冠词"an"是不正确的。

× I think it's social media because I like to share my life.

✓ I think it's social media because I like to share my life.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× For example, when I take some photos in coffee shops, I'd like to take some beautiful photos and try to post on my Instagram account.

✓ For example, when I take some photos in coffee shops, I'd like to take some beautiful photos and try to post them on my Instagram account.

"post"后面应加宾语"them"，指代前面的"photos"，使句子完整。

× Although I'd like to watch some exotic videos and try to make some videos to make fun with my friends.

✓ Although I'd like to watch some exotic videos and try to make some videos to have fun with my friends.

"make fun"用法不正确，正确表达应为"have fun"，表示玩得开心。

× I found most of because of advertising and nowadays many apps will have many different advertising, for example like some of the games or some of the healthy or Redbook apps.

✓ I found most of them because of advertising, and nowadays many apps have different advertisements, for example some games or health apps like Redbook.

句子结构混乱，缺少宾语"them"，"advertising"应改为复数形式"advertisements"，"some of the healthy or Redbook apps"表达不清，改为"health apps like Redbook"更准确。

× And this is if I feel interested I will try to find some details on it.

✓ If I feel interested, I will try to find some details about it.

句子结构不正确，"And this is if"应改为"If"引导条件句，"find some details on it"中的介词"on"应改为"about"。

× I think I would use the planning app for me because I set a goal into my future is that it became a professional academic, therefore I need to take different exams.

✓ I think I would use a planning app because I have set a goal for my future to become a professional academic; therefore, I need to take different exams.

"would use the planning app for me"表达不自然，改为"use a planning app"更合适。"set a goal into my future is that it became"语法错误，改为"have set a goal for my future to become"。

× So therefore I need to prepare different plans to revisit.

✓ Therefore, I need to prepare different plans to review.

"revisit"用法不当，通常指再次访问某地，语境中应使用"review"表示复习。