应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use correct verb forms and prepositions, and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your points with linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, instead of 'I've been use AIF recently', say 'I've been using the AIF app recently'. Avoid mixing unrelated apps in one sentence without clear connection.

範例: I've been using the AIF app recently to practice my iOS skills because it helps improve my efficiency. Additionally, I often use Instagram and FaceTime to stay in contact with my fans and keep up with the latest trends.

建議: Avoid repeating the same phrase and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. For example, instead of repeating 'social media apps', say 'these apps' or 'they'. Also, use correct expressions like 'latest information about new products'.

範例: I'm usually interested in social media apps because they provide the latest information about new product releases. Through viewing posts or short videos, I can learn about the newest products available.

建議: Use more natural expressions and correct grammar. For example, say 'I find out about different apps by browsing the Internet'. Also, clarify your process with linking words and avoid awkward phrases like 'try some function onto it'.

範例: I find out about different apps by browsing the Internet. When people talk about or recommend certain apps, I usually download them and try out their features.

建議: Improve grammar and clarity by using singular/plural forms correctly and clearer explanations. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'I would like to use functional apps, especially those with AI technology, because they can do more than just conversations, such as booking or reserving tables.'

範例: In the future, I would like to use functional apps, especially those with AI technology. As you know, AI can do more than just have conversations; for example, it can book or reserve tables for you, which would provide me with a better experience.

× I've been use AIF recently to practice for my iOS and use tests because it's helped me improve my skill efficiency.

✓ I've been using AIF recently to practice for my iOS and use tests because it's helped me improve my skill efficiency.

The verb 'been' should be followed by the '-ing' form of the verb to form the present perfect continuous tense. 'Use' should be corrected to 'using' to match this structure.

× But often I use Instagram in my FaceTime to stay contact with my fans to see what is the trends.

✓ But often I use Instagram and FaceTime to stay in contact with my fans to see what the trends are.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'and' is appropriate to connect two apps. Also, 'stay contact' should be 'stay in contact'. Additionally, 'what is the trends' should be 'what the trends are' for correct word order and agreement.

× Social media apps can give me more latest information on release products.

✓ Social media apps can give me the latest information on released products.

'More latest' is incorrect because 'latest' is a superlative and does not combine with 'more'. Also, 'release products' should be 'released products' to correctly describe the products.

× On the views or short video I can get the newest product.

✓ From the views or short videos, I can get information about the newest products.

The original sentence lacks clarity and correct structure. 'On the views or short video' is awkward; 'From the views or short videos' is better. Also, 'newest product' should be plural 'newest products' to match context.

× I found out the different apps through browsing the Internet.

✓ I find out about different apps by browsing the Internet.

The question is about a habitual action, so present tense 'find out' is more appropriate than past tense 'found out'. Also, 'the different apps' should be 'different apps' without 'the'.

× When people talk about or recommend the apps I would choose, I would download the apps and try some function onto it.

✓ When people talk about or recommend apps I would choose, I download the apps and try some functions on them.

'Try some function onto it' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' and 'functions' should be plural to match 'some'. Also, 'would download' is changed to 'download' to indicate habitual action.

× I would like to use a functional apps like the apps with AI.

✓ I would like to use functional apps like the apps with AI.

'A functional apps' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'apps' is plural. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× As you know AI can do everything not about the conversation but they can rebook or reserve the table for you nowadays.

✓ As you know, AI can do everything, not just conversations, but it can rebook or reserve a table for you nowadays.

'They' is incorrect for AI, which is singular and should be referred to as 'it'. Also, 'not about the conversation' is awkward and corrected to 'not just conversations'. 'The table' is changed to 'a table' for general reference.

× So AIS can give me more experience.

✓ So AI can give me more experience.

'AIS' appears to be a typo; it should be 'AI'. Also, 'experience' is uncountable here and does not need modification.