应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. Tatoeba, 'are you speaking test' wa machigatte imasu. Motto seikaku na kotoba o tsukatte, bunshou o rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai. Mata, fukuzatsu na bun wa 5 bun ijou ni naranai you ni shiyou.

範例: Recently, I used an app to prepare for the IELTS speaking test because I wanted to improve my speaking skills for the upcoming exam. The app was very helpful and easy to use.

建議: Kotae wa sukoshi fukuzatsu de, kotoba no kurikaeshi ga arimasu. Motto shizen de, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai. Mata, setsumei o motto meikaku ni shite, rikai o tasukeru you ni shiyou.

範例: Usually, I don't use many apps, but recently I am interested in apps that help preserve languages. These apps allow native speakers to record and save their less common languages.

建議: Kotae wa kantan sugite, setsumei ga fukaku, bun no tsuzuki mo warui desu. Motto seikaku ni setsumei shi, rikai shi yasui bunshou ni shiyou. Mata, rensetsu-go o tsukatte, bun no nagare o yoku shiyou.

範例: Usually, I don't actively search for apps. I download them when I come across them by chance while browsing or from recommendations.

建議: Kotae ni kurikaeshi ga arimasu. Motto shizen de, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte, setsumei o meikaku ni shiyou. Mata, rensetsu-go o tsukatte, bun no nagare o yoku shiyou.

範例: Currently, I don't have plans to download any apps, but if I do, I would like to use language learning apps on my phone to improve my speaking skills.

× Uh, recently I used an app for preparing are you speaking test and be because I needed to train my speaking ability for forthcoming test and the app was quite nice.

✓ Uh, recently I used an app for preparing for your speaking test because I needed to train my speaking ability for the forthcoming test and the app was quite nice.

The phrase 'for preparing are you speaking test' is incorrect. The correct form is 'for preparing for your speaking test' because 'prepare' is followed by the preposition 'for' when indicating the purpose. Also, 'are you' is a mishearing or typo for 'your'. Additionally, 'forthcoming test' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific upcoming test.

× Uh, recently I used an app for preparing are you speaking test and be because I needed to train my speaking ability for forthcoming test and the app was quite nice.

✓ Uh, recently I used an app for preparing for your speaking test because I needed to train my speaking ability for the forthcoming test and the app was quite nice.

The preposition 'for' is necessary after 'preparing' to indicate the purpose. Missing 'for' causes the sentence to be ungrammatical.

× Uh, recently I used an app for preparing are you speaking test and be because I needed to train my speaking ability for forthcoming test and the app was quite nice.

✓ Uh, recently I used an app for preparing for your speaking test because I needed to train my speaking ability for the forthcoming test and the app was quite nice.

The phrase 'forthcoming test' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific test that is upcoming.

× Uh, recently I used an app for preparing are you speaking test and be because I needed to train my speaking ability for forthcoming test and the app was quite nice.

✓ Uh, recently I used an app for preparing for your speaking test because I needed to train my speaking ability for the forthcoming test and the app was quite nice.

The phrase 'are you speaking test' is incorrect; it should be 'your speaking test' to correctly use the possessive pronoun.

× Uh, usually I don't use apps that much, but currently I'm interested in apps for language preservation, uh, which is which are for native speakers or little languages to record their language.

✓ Uh, usually I don't use apps that much, but currently I'm interested in apps for language preservation, which are for native speakers of small languages to record their language.

The phrase 'little languages' is incorrect; the correct term is 'small languages' when referring to languages with few speakers. Also, 'which is which are' is redundant; only 'which are' is needed to refer to 'apps'. Additionally, 'native speakers or little languages' is incorrect; it should be 'native speakers of small languages' to show possession.

× Uh, usually I don't use apps that much, but currently I'm interested in apps for language preservation, uh, which is which are for native speakers or little languages to record their language.

✓ Uh, usually I don't use apps that much, but currently I'm interested in apps for language preservation, which are for native speakers of small languages to record their language.

The preposition 'of' is necessary after 'native speakers' to indicate the language they speak. Without 'of', the sentence is ungrammatical.

× Usually I don't search for apps and I download those apps when I. Came up with them by a chance.

✓ Usually I don't search for apps; I download those apps when I come across them by chance.

The sentence has a period in the middle ('when I. Came up'), which breaks the sentence incorrectly. Also, 'came up with them by a chance' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'come across them by chance'. The verb tense should be present simple 'come' to match the habitual action.

× Usually I don't search for apps and I download those apps when I. Came up with them by a chance.

✓ Usually I don't search for apps; I download those apps when I come across them by chance.

The verb 'came up with' is past tense and incorrect in this context. The correct phrase is 'come across' in present tense to indicate habitual action.

× Usually I don't search for apps and I download those apps when I. Came up with them by a chance.

✓ Usually I don't search for apps; I download those apps when I come across them by chance.

The phrase 'by a chance' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'by chance' without the article 'a'.

× At present I I don't have any plan for downloading apps, but if I do, I I'd like to use those telephone app for my language learning because I I want to improve my speaking skill.

✓ At present I don't have any plans to download apps, but if I do, I'd like to use those telephone apps for my language learning because I want to improve my speaking skills.

The phrase 'plan for downloading apps' is better expressed as 'plans to download apps'. Also, 'those telephone app' should be plural 'apps' to agree with 'those'. 'Speaking skill' should be plural 'speaking skills' to refer to the ability in general.

× At present I I don't have any plan for downloading apps, but if I do, I I'd like to use those telephone app for my language learning because I I want to improve my speaking skill.

✓ At present I don't have any plans to download apps, but if I do, I'd like to use those telephone apps for my language learning because I want to improve my speaking skills.

'Plan' should be plural 'plans' when used with 'any'. 'Telephone app' should be plural 'apps' to match 'those'. 'Speaking skill' is usually plural 'speaking skills' when referring to general ability.