应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata agar lebih natural dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas.

範例: Recently, I have been using WhatsApp a lot because it is essential for communicating with my friends and family.

建議: Gunakan struktur kalimat yang lebih tepat dan perbaiki tata bahasa. Tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan spesifik.

範例: I am usually interested in social media apps like Instagram and Facebook because they connect me with many people and allow me to share important moments in my life.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata kerja. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih sederhana dan jelas untuk menjelaskan proses menemukan aplikasi baru.

範例: I usually look for new apps in the Apple App Store, and sometimes I check the Google Play Store when I use an Android device.

建議: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kejelasan kalimat. Jelaskan dengan lebih spesifik tentang aplikasi yang ingin digunakan dan fungsinya.

範例: In the future, I would like to try a smart driving app that helps control vehicles automatically, making driving safer and more convenient.

× I think it's very usual for every people nowadays.

✓ I think it's very usual for every person nowadays.

The word 'people' is plural, but 'every' requires a singular noun. Therefore, 'every people' is incorrect; it should be 'every person'.

× What's up is the eminently important for their life.

✓ WhatsApp is eminently important for their lives.

'What's up' is incorrect; the app name is 'WhatsApp'. Also, 'the eminently important' is incorrect; 'eminently important' is an adjective phrase and does not need 'the'. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' to match 'their'.

× So I believe that every people recently always opening their WhatsApp for communicating with other people's.

✓ So I believe that every person recently always opens their WhatsApp to communicate with other people.

Again, 'every people' should be 'every person'. 'Always opening' is incorrect; it should be 'always opens' to match the present tense and subject-verb agreement. 'Other people's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be 'other people'.

× I always seem to the application such as Instagram and also Facebook because it connects us with lot of people and also it kind of the platform for us to share everything's in my life.

✓ I always use applications such as Instagram and Facebook because they connect us with a lot of people and are platforms for us to share everything in my life.

'Seem to the application' is incorrect; 'use applications' is correct. 'Lot of people' needs an article 'a lot of people'. 'It kind of the platform' is incorrect; it should be 'they are platforms'. 'Everything's' is a contraction for 'everything is' and incorrect here; it should be 'everything'.

× I always trying to looking for new applications in application store in Apple store but sometimes when I use Android I also looking at the play store.

✓ I am always trying to look for new applications in the Apple App Store, but sometimes when I use Android, I also look at the Play Store.

'Always trying to looking' is incorrect; it should be 'always trying to look'. 'Application store in Apple store' should be 'Apple App Store'. 'I also looking' should be 'I also look'.

× In the future I it's will be lovely for me to try the application for smart driving.

✓ In the future, it will be lovely for me to try an application for smart driving.

'I it's will be' is incorrect; correct form is 'it will be'. 'The application' should be 'an application' as it is not specific.

× Smart driving is actually an application that enables us to to attend or vehicle on this automotive or on the automatic driving.

✓ Smart driving is actually an application that enables us to attend or control a vehicle with automatic driving features.

'To to attend or vehicle on this automotive or on the automatic driving' is incorrect and unclear. Correct prepositions and verbs are needed: 'attend or control a vehicle with automatic driving features'.