应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'Usually in the daily basis activity', say 'On a daily basis'. Also, specify the types of games or why you enjoy them to enrich your answer.

範例: On a daily basis, I use social media apps like Instagram, Facebook, and WhatsApp to stay connected with friends and family. Additionally, I enjoy playing casual games like puzzles for relaxation.

建議: Focus on clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to be more specific about what kind of information you get from Instagram reels and why you find them enjoyable.

範例: I am usually interested in social media apps, especially Instagram. I enjoy watching Instagram reels because they are entertaining and provide me with daily updates on current trends and news.

建議: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be more specific about how you explore or choose apps from the App Store.

範例: I usually find different apps through the App Store on my phone. It offers a wide variety of apps, including educational, social media, and gaming apps, which I explore based on my interests.

建議: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence fluency. Provide more specific reasons why you want to use educational apps and how they will benefit your studies.

範例: In the future, I would like to use educational apps because they can help me improve my knowledge and support my studies effectively.

× Usually in the daily basis activity I use social medias like Instagram, Facebook and WhatsApp and for the fun I play games.

✓ Usually on a daily basis, I use social media like Instagram, Facebook, and WhatsApp, and for fun, I play games.

The phrase 'social medias' is incorrect because 'media' is already plural; 'social media' is treated as a singular collective noun. Also, 'in the daily basis activity' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' and the phrase should be 'on a daily basis'. The phrase 'for the fun' should be 'for fun' as 'fun' is uncountable here.

× Usually in the daily basis activity I use social medias like Instagram, Facebook and WhatsApp and for the fun I play games.

✓ Usually on a daily basis, I use social media like Instagram, Facebook, and WhatsApp, and for fun, I play games.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'daily basis'; the correct preposition is 'on' as in 'on a daily basis'. Also, 'for the fun' should be 'for fun' because 'fun' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× Usually I love to scroll out in social media apps, especially in the Instagram.

✓ Usually, I love to scroll through social media apps, especially Instagram.

The preposition 'out in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'through' when talking about scrolling content. Also, 'in the Instagram' is incorrect; we say 'on Instagram' or simply 'Instagram' without 'the'.

× Usually I love to scroll out in social media apps, especially in the Instagram.

✓ Usually, I love to scroll through social media apps, especially Instagram.

The definite article 'the' before 'Instagram' is unnecessary because Instagram is a proper noun and does not require an article.

× It's it's so much fun and so and they'll provide us so many information about what hap what happen in the daily.

✓ It's so much fun, and it provides us with a lot of information about what happens daily.

The sentence has repetition ('It's it's'), unnecessary conjunctions ('and so and'), and incorrect pronoun usage ('they'll' referring to Instagram reels). Also, 'so many information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable; 'a lot of information' is correct. The phrase 'what hap what happen in the daily' is unclear and should be 'what happens daily'.

× Usually in my phone there is a one app App Store.

✓ Usually, on my phone, there is one app called the App Store.

The phrase 'a one app' is incorrect; 'one' already implies singularity, so 'a' is unnecessary. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' because apps are on devices. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'called' before 'the App Store'.

× Usually in my phone there is a one app App Store.

✓ Usually, on my phone, there is one app called the App Store.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'App Store' because it is a specific app name.

× It's provide a variety, so many variety about apps such as education apps, social media apps, games and other things.

✓ It provides a variety, so many varieties of apps such as educational apps, social media apps, games, and other things.

The verb 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'variety' is countable in this context, so 'varieties' is more appropriate. 'Education apps' should be 'educational apps' as an adjective form.

× It's provide a variety, so many variety about apps such as education apps, social media apps, games and other things.

✓ It provides a variety, so many varieties of apps such as educational apps, social media apps, games, and other things.

The noun 'education' should be changed to the adjective 'educational' to correctly describe the type of apps.

× I think I should use uh uh, education apps because in in the future I would use this app for my good study.

✓ I think I should use educational apps because in the future I will use these apps for my studies.

The modal verb 'should' is acceptable here, but 'would' is incorrect for future intention; 'will' is appropriate. 'This app' should be 'these apps' to match plural 'educational apps'. 'Good study' is unnatural; 'studies' is the correct noun.