应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，使用正确的单复数形式，并且避免冗长的句子。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达观点，同时增加连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Recently, I have been using WeChat, which is a social communication app. I often connect with my friends and family through it, and I also use it for work. It is very convenient for daily life and less stressful compared to emails.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且句子结构混乱。建议加强主谓一致和介词的正确使用，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以用更准确的词汇描述兴趣，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: I am really interested in video apps, such as TikTok. It offers appealing short videos that are very engaging, and I find it hard to stop watching them.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，句子不够连贯。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免句子残缺。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明通过哪些途径发现应用。

範例: Actually, my friends and family often recommend interesting and different apps to me, which is a good way to discover new ones. Besides, I also find useful apps by browsing the App Store.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意动词形式和冠词的使用，避免重复表达。可以用更简洁的句子表达未来的计划，并说明原因。

範例: In the future, I would like to use reading apps because we have less time to read paper books. Electronic books are more convenient, so I am interested in finding a good reading app.

× I use WeChat recently is a social communication apps and I always connect with my friends, my family and deal with my work on that.

✓ I have used WeChat recently. It is a social communication app, and I always connect with my friends, my family, and deal with my work on it.

“apps” 应为单数形式 “app”，因为指的是一个应用程序。句子结构也需要调整以符合时态和表达习惯。

× I use WeChat recently is a social communication apps and I always connect with my friends, my family and deal with my work on that.

✓ I have used WeChat recently. It is a social communication app, and I always connect with my friends, my family, and deal with my work on it.

“use WeChat recently” 时态不正确，应该用现在完成时 “have used” 表示最近的经历。

× I use WeChat recently is a social communication apps and I always connect with my friends, my family and deal with my work on that.

✓ I have used WeChat recently. It is a social communication app, and I always connect with my friends, my family, and deal with my work on it.

“deal with my work on that” 中的介词 “on” 用法不当，应该用 “on it” 指代应用程序。

× It's very convenient for our daily life and give me less stressful rather than the emails I have.

✓ It's very convenient for our daily life and gives me less stress compared to the emails I have.

“give me less stressful” 中 “stressful” 是形容词，应该用名词 “stress”，且动词要与主语一致，改为 “gives”。

× It's very convenient for our daily life and give me less stressful rather than the emails I have.

✓ It's very convenient for our daily life and gives me less stress compared to the emails I have.

主语是单数 “It”，动词应使用第三人称单数形式 “gives”。

× It's very convenient for our daily life and give me less stressful rather than the emails I have.

✓ It's very convenient for our daily life and gives me less stress compared to the emails I have.

“rather than” 用法不当，表达比较时应使用 “compared to” 或 “than”。

× I really interested in video apps, for example a Tiktok people are all interested about that and it will give you some appealed short videos and you can't stop it to use that.

✓ I am really interested in video apps. For example, TikTok is popular; people are all interested in it, and it gives you some appealing short videos that you can't stop watching.

“I really interested” 缺少系动词，应为 “I am really interested”。“interested about” 应为 “interested in”。“appealed” 应为形容词 “appealing”。“can't stop it to use that” 结构错误，应为 “can't stop watching it”。

× I really interested in video apps, for example a Tiktok people are all interested about that and it will give you some appealed short videos and you can't stop it to use that.

✓ I am really interested in video apps. For example, TikTok is popular; people are all interested in it, and it gives you some appealing short videos that you can't stop watching.

“a Tiktok” 中 “TikTok” 是专有名词，不需要冠词。

× In fact, my friends or families always give me some recommendations to find the interesting and different apps, and I will.

✓ In fact, my friends or family always give me some recommendations to find interesting and different apps, and I will.

“families” 应为单数 “family”，指家庭成员。

× In fact, my friends or families always give me some recommendations to find the interesting and different apps, and I will.

✓ In fact, my friends or family always give me some recommendations to find interesting and different apps, and I will.

句子末尾 “and I will” 不完整，建议补充完整或删除。

× And then I'll also found the apps in the App Store stores, I think very useful.

✓ And then I'll also find apps in the App Store; I think they are very useful.

“found” 是过去式，应为将来时 “find”。“apps” 不需要重复 “stores”。

× And then I'll also found the apps in the App Store stores, I think very useful.

✓ And then I'll also find apps in the App Store; I think they are very useful.

“found” 是过去式，句中时态应为将来时 “will find”。

× And then I'll also found the apps in the App Store stores, I think very useful.

✓ And then I'll also find apps in the App Store; I think they are very useful.

“in the App Store stores” 中重复使用 “stores” 不必要，应简化为 “in the App Store”。

× In the future, I think I would like you the reading apps because we have less time to read on the paper, so we just use the electronic books.

✓ In the future, I think I would like to use reading apps because we have less time to read on paper, so we just use electronic books.

“would like you the reading apps” 结构错误，应为 “would like to use reading apps”。

× In the future, I think I would like you the reading apps because we have less time to read on the paper, so we just use the electronic books.

✓ In the future, I think I would like to use reading apps because we have less time to read on paper, so we just use electronic books.

“the reading apps” 应为复数 “reading apps”，且不需要冠词 “the”。

× In the future, I think I would like you the reading apps because we have less time to read on the paper, so we just use the electronic books.

✓ In the future, I think I would like to use reading apps because we have less time to read on paper, so we just use electronic books.

“the paper” 和 “the electronic books” 中的定冠词使用不当，泛指时不需要冠词。