应用程序— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to be more precise and avoid filler words like 'yeah'. Also, clarify phrases such as 'practice my speaker school' which is confusing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Recently, I've been using English learning apps to prepare for my IELTS exam. I usually spend about 30 minutes to an hour each day memorizing new words and phrases to improve my vocabulary.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases like 'mentoring learners' and minor grammatical mistakes. Try to use more precise vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. Avoid vague expressions like 'maybe in a day'.

範例: As a language learner, I am interested in apps like Duolingo because they simplify language learning and help me track my progress. Moreover, these apps send notifications to remind me if I miss any lessons, which keeps me motivated.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and structured. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence flow using linking words. Also, be careful with grammar, for example, 'how rating that is' should be 'what the rating is'.

範例: I usually find apps through advertisements on Facebook. I check user reviews and ratings, and if they are positive, I download the app to try it for a few days. However, if I don't like it after a week, I delete it.

建議: Your answer shows good ideas but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors. Try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition of 'maybe'. Also, complete your sentences fully and use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: In the future, I would like to use finance apps to track my income and expenses. Additionally, I plan to learn about stocks and investments to understand the market better and find opportunities to increase my earnings.

× Recently I've been using some English apps to practice my speaker school and yeah to make some preparation for my eye exam.

✓ Recently I've been using some English apps to practice my speaking skills and yeah to make some preparation for my eye exam.

The word 'speaker' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form 'speaking' should be used to indicate the activity of speaking. 'Speaking skills' is the proper phrase to describe the ability being practiced.

× So usually I spend around 30 minutes to one hour scrolling and yeah, trying to memorizing the words as well as the phrases to boost my vocabulary band.

✓ So usually I spend around 30 minutes to one hour scrolling and yeah, trying to memorize the words as well as the phrases to boost my vocabulary band.

After 'trying to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the gerund. Therefore, 'memorizing' should be corrected to 'memorize'.

× As a language learner, I am interested in some acts such as Duolingo or mentoring learners because these apps simplify the language and it provides me the sense of learning and making progress.

✓ As a language learner, I am interested in some apps such as Duolingo or mentoring learners because these apps simplify the language and they provide me the sense of learning and making progress.

The word 'acts' is incorrect; it should be 'apps' to refer to applications. Also, 'it provides' should be 'they provide' to agree with the plural subject 'apps'.

× So if I quit learning, maybe in a day there are some notifications and there will be reminder to let me know that I have missed some deadlines.

✓ So if I quit learning, maybe in a day there will be some notifications and there will be reminders to let me know that I have missed some deadlines.

The phrase 'there are some notifications' should be 'there will be some notifications' to match the future possibility. Also, 'there will be reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to agree with 'some notifications'.

× Usually I see them advertised on Facebook, so I just click and check whether people like it and how rating that is.

✓ Usually I see them advertised on Facebook, so I just click and check whether people like it and what the rating is.

The phrase 'how rating that is' is incorrect. The correct form is 'what the rating is' to inquire about the rating.

× So if that is good, review.

✓ So if that is good, I read the reviews.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I read the reviews' completes the thought and clarifies the action.

× If this app receives good feedback from the users, uh, maybe download and try to use for a couple of days.

✓ If this app receives good feedback from the users, uh, maybe I will download and try to use it for a couple of days.

The subject 'I' is missing before 'download', and the object pronoun 'it' is needed after 'use' to refer to the app.

× But after using for a whole week, I feel I don't like it much.

✓ But after using it for a whole week, I felt I didn't like it much.

The sentence refers to a completed action in the past, so past tense verbs 'felt' and 'didn't like' should be used instead of present tense.

× Maybe in the future I will download some finance apps to keep track of my money flow, my income and how to facilitate my income.

✓ Maybe in the future I will download some finance apps to keep track of my money flow, my income, and how to manage my income.

The phrase 'how to facilitate my income' is awkward and incorrect. 'Manage my income' is a more appropriate and natural expression.

× So maybe I will try to learn something belonging to stocks and investment to see how the market works and are there any opportunities there for me to boost my.

✓ So maybe I will try to learn something related to stocks and investment to see how the market works and whether there are any opportunities for me to boost my income.

The phrase 'something belonging to stocks and investment' is incorrect; 'something related to stocks and investment' is better. Also, the question 'are there any opportunities there' should be integrated properly with 'whether there are any opportunities'. The sentence was incomplete and needed 'income' at the end for clarity.