交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，建议练习完整句子表达，避免断断续续。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体地点举例说明。

範例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my neighborhood. For example, you can find them near the hospital, the middle school, and close to my house.

建議: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议用完整句子表达想法，并具体说明为什么想要改变交通系统。

範例: I would like to build a subway system to improve public transportation. This would make it more convenient and help reduce traffic congestion on the roads.

× Out multiple crosswalks around our neighborhood because.

✓ There are multiple crosswalks around our neighborhood.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且“Out”应为“There are”表示存在多个斑马线，符合复数形式。

× Out multiple crosswalks around our neighborhood because.

✓ There are multiple crosswalks around our neighborhood.

原句结构不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不通顺。应使用完整句子结构。

× Wait.

✓ Wait.

单独的“Wait.”作为回答不完整，建议在口语中避免单独使用。

× The past, the hospital and middle school, and not far from my neighbor.

✓ In the past, the hospital and middle school were not far from my neighborhood.

原句缺少谓语，且表达不完整，需补充完整句子结构。

× To build a system of subway.

✓ I would like to build a subway system.

不定式短语不能单独作为句子，应补充主语和谓语使句子完整。

× And to make the public transformer convenient and eat the.

✓ And to make public transportation convenient and efficient.

“transformer”应为“transportation”，且“eat the”无意义，应改为“efficient”表示高效。

× Add ground the traffic.

✓ Reduce ground traffic.

原句语序混乱且缺少谓语，应调整为完整且通顺的表达。