交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: In your answer, you should directly address the question about crosswalks instead of mentioning 'girls walking'. Try to use clear and correct sentence structures, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, you can start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about the number and location of crosswalks, and explain their importance for safety.

範例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live, especially in the town center. For instance, near traffic lights, there are several marked crosswalks that allow people to cross safely. These crosswalks help reduce accidents and make it easier for pedestrians to move around.

建議: Your answer should be clearer and more organized. Start with a direct response to the question, then explain specific problems with traffic lights and their effects on safety. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect your ideas. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic lights in my area because some of them are broken or show confusing colors. This makes it unsafe for drivers and pedestrians, and sometimes causes accidents. Therefore, fixing these traffic lights would help make travel safer for everyone.

× Yes, there are so many girls walking around the place where I live, especially in the middle of the town.

✓ Yes, there are so many people walking around the place where I live, especially in the middle of the town.

The original sentence uses 'girls' which is too specific and likely incorrect in context. The question is about crosswalks, so 'people' is more appropriate and plural. This corrects the singular/plural and semantic issue.

× For example, in run of the traffic light there so many crosswalk where people can cross the road by walking to from the place to another place all day it is safely for people to travel.

✓ For example, near the traffic lights, there are many crosswalks where people can cross the road safely from one place to another all day.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing 'are' after 'there', 'crosswalk' should be plural 'crosswalks', awkward phrasing 'in run of the traffic light' corrected to 'near the traffic lights', and 'it is safely' corrected to 'safely'. This fixes the 'there be' issue and plural form.

× For example, in run of the traffic light there so many crosswalk where people can cross the road by walking to from the place to another place all day it is safely for people to travel.

✓ For example, near the traffic lights, there are many crosswalks where people can cross the road safely from one place to another all day.

The word 'crosswalk' should be plural 'crosswalks' because it refers to multiple crosswalks. This is a singular/plural issue.

× Yes, there are so many thing I would like to change about the traffic in my area because some traffic light like a broken down it is related about a color, so it is unsafe for the people to travel or applied to have a client and sometimes they could be getting an accident or.

✓ Yes, there are so many things I would like to change about the traffic in my area because some traffic lights are broken down or have color issues, so it is unsafe for people to travel and sometimes accidents could happen.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'traffic light' should be plural 'traffic lights' to match the plural subject. This fixes singular/plural issues.

× Yes, there are so many thing I would like to change about the traffic in my area because some traffic light like a broken down it is related about a color, so it is unsafe for the people to travel or applied to have a client and sometimes they could be getting an accident or.

✓ Yes, there are so many things I would like to change about the traffic in my area because some traffic lights are broken down or have color issues, so it is unsafe for people to travel and sometimes accidents could happen.

The sentence is missing 'are' after 'traffic lights' to form correct 'there be' structure. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar correctness.

× For example, in run of the traffic light there so many crosswalk where people can cross the road by walking to from the place to another place all day it is safely for people to travel.

✓ For example, near the traffic lights, there are many crosswalks where people can cross the road safely from one place to another all day.

The phrase 'in run of the traffic light' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'near' to indicate proximity. Also, 'by walking to from the place to another place' is awkward and corrected to 'from one place to another'.