交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific details. Keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, there are many crosswalks near where I live. However, the heavy traffic and constant honking around these areas often disturb me. For example, when I walk near the crosswalks, the noise can be so loud that it gives me a headache. This makes crossing the street stressful at times.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your response concise and coherent.

範例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic conditions near crosswalks. The constant honking especially affects children who are trying to study nearby. Therefore, I believe stricter regulations should be enforced to reduce noise and make the area safer and quieter for everyone.

× there was a lot of crosswalks and it's really disturbing to me

✓ there were a lot of crosswalks and it's really disturbing to me

The noun 'crosswalks' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number with the plural subject.

× whenever I go on rolls, I have to face our traffic congestions regularly

✓ whenever I go on roads, I have to face traffic congestion regularly

The phrase 'go on rolls' is incorrect; it should be 'go on roads'. Also, 'our traffic congestions' is incorrect because 'traffic congestion' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'our' or plural form.

× there was there horn was blowing constantly and it was erected to my ears

✓ their horn was blowing constantly and it was irritating to my ears

The pronoun 'there' is incorrect; it should be 'their' to indicate possession. Also, 'erected to my ears' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'irritating to my ears'.

× I had a slightly headache after come back home

✓ I had a slight headache after coming back home

The adjective 'slightly' should be 'slight' to describe 'headache'. Also, 'after come back home' is incorrect; it should be 'after coming back home' using the gerund form after 'after'.

× I want to do something against a crosswalk so that no one phase are traffic conditions

✓ I want to do something about the crosswalks so that no one faces traffic conditions

The modal verb 'want to do' is correct, but 'against a crosswalk' is incorrect; it should be 'about the crosswalks'. Also, 'phase are traffic conditions' is incorrect; it should be 'faces traffic conditions'.

× especially the children say mostly their face or difficulty when the horns are blowing by them continuously

✓ especially the children mostly face difficulty when the horns are blowing near them continuously

The phrase 'children say mostly their face or difficulty' is incorrect; it should be 'children mostly face difficulty'. Also, 'blowing by them' is better expressed as 'blowing near them'.

× It will it. This is just job they are studying

✓ This is just a job they are studying for

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure by adding 'a' before 'job' and 'for' at the end.

× So I want that this chick action should be taken against this

✓ So I want action to be taken against this

The phrase 'this chick action' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'action'. Also, 'I want that this action should be taken' is awkward; the correct form is 'I want action to be taken'.