交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific details. Also, avoid grammatical errors and use correct vocabulary, for example, 'crosswalks' instead of 'cross valkyr', and 'crowded' instead of 'crowder'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, there are not many crosswalks around where I live because it is a countryside area. Since the area is spacious and not crowded, there is less need for crosswalks. I enjoy the peaceful environment without much noise or traffic.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Please try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the problem with specific details, and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Yes, I would like to improve the traffic lights at the crossroads in my area. Currently, the traffic lights are dirty and dim, which makes it difficult for drivers to see them clearly. As a result, accidents sometimes happen. Therefore, cleaning or replacing these lights would make the roads safer.

× No, there is no lot of cross valkyr around the place where I live because I live in a countryside area and it is a freely area.

✓ No, there are not a lot of crosswalks around the place where I live because I live in a countryside area and it is a free area.

The phrase 'no lot' is incorrect; it should be 'not a lot' to indicate quantity. 'Cross valkyr' is a misspelling of 'crosswalks' and should be plural to match 'a lot of'. 'Freely area' is incorrect; the adjective 'free' should be used instead of the adverb 'freely' to describe the noun 'area'.

× In this area there are no. Crowder and no nose noise around me and I enjoy a lot in this area.

✓ In this area there is no crowd and no noise around me and I enjoy it a lot in this area.

'Crowder' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'crowd' and it is singular here. 'Nose noise' is a misspelling of 'noise'. The phrase 'enjoy a lot' is incomplete; it should be 'enjoy it a lot' to specify what is enjoyed.

× Yes in my area I changed the crossroads Serbi cause the lighter over crossroads is a very dirty and the brightness of that light is very low so people counter.

✓ Yes, in my area I changed the crossroads service because the light over the crossroads was very dirty and the brightness of that light was very low so people could not see clearly.

The verb 'changed' is correct in past tense. 'Serbi' is likely 'service'. 'Lighter' should be 'light'. 'Is' should be 'was' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Counter' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'could not see clearly' or 'could not pass safely'.

× Save this lights and accidents are occur.

✓ People could not save these lights and accidents occurred.

'Save this lights' is incorrect; likely intended 'see these lights'. 'Are occur' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'occurred'. Modal verb 'could' is needed to express ability or possibility in past tense.