交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答に多くの「uh」や「umm」が含まれており、流暢さが低下しています。また、「across works」は誤りで、「crosswalks」が正しいです。回答は直接的ですが、文法的な誤りと繰り返しが目立ちます。より自然で効果的な表現を心がけ、具体的な情報を簡潔に述べることが重要です。

範例: No, there are only two or three crosswalks near my home, especially on the way to the nearest station. Since the area is quite dangerous, I always make sure to be very careful when crossing the road.

建議: 文法的な誤りがあり、意味が不明瞭な部分があります（"It makes me. A few more safer than before."）。回答は短く、詳細な説明や理由が不足しています。より明確で自然な表現を使い、なぜその変更が必要かを具体的に説明することが望ましいです。

範例: Yes, I would like the local government to build a new, wider road near my home because the current roads are narrow and unsafe. This improvement would make it safer for both drivers and pedestrians.

× there are some across works, uh, near my home

✓ there are some crosswalks, uh, near my home

The word 'across works' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'crosswalks'. This is a singular and plural issue where the noun form must be corrected to the proper plural form.

× I think uh, two or three crosswalks, umm, uh, in my road to go to the nearest station.

✓ I think uh, there are two or three crosswalks, umm, uh, on my road to go to the nearest station.

The sentence lacks the verb 'are' to indicate existence, and 'in my road' should be 'on my road'. This involves singular/plural agreement and preposition use, but focusing on singular/plural, the verb 'are' is necessary to agree with plural 'crosswalks'.

× I always be careful.

✓ I am always careful.

The verb 'be' is incorrectly used in the present tense here. The correct form is 'am' for first person singular in present tense. This is a present tense issue.

× It makes me. A few more safer than before.

✓ It makes me a little safer than before.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'A few more safer' is incorrect; 'a little safer' is the correct comparative phrase. This is a sentence structure error.