交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地说明有很多人行横道，并解释原因。

範例: Yes, there are many crosswalks in my hometown because they help people cross the streets safely and conveniently.

建議: 回答时应注意语法准确性和表达自然，使用连接词使句子更连贯。可以具体说明增加红绿灯的好处。

範例: Yes, I would like to see more traffic lights installed because they can reduce accidents and make it safer for pedestrians to cross the streets.

× I think there are too many crosswalks in my hometown and in China there are many crosswalks in the street because it is convenient for the people. Run and work.

✓ I think there are too many crosswalks in my hometown, and in China, there are many crosswalks on the streets because they are convenient for people to walk and work.

原句结构混乱，句子中“Run and work.”独立成句，缺少主语和谓语，导致句意不清。应将其与前句合并，形成完整的句子，表达“方便人们行走和工作”。建议将“in the street”改为复数形式“on the streets”，更符合习惯用法。

× Yes, I think the traffic lights should be set up more in the street because it can reduce the accidents and it makes safer to the pedestrians.

✓ Yes, I think more traffic lights should be set up on the streets because they can reduce accidents and make it safer for pedestrians.

“should be set up more in the street”表达不自然，建议改为“more traffic lights should be set up on the streets”，更符合英语表达习惯。动词“can reduce the accidents”中“the accidents”不需要定冠词，改为“reduce accidents”。“it makes safer to the pedestrians”结构错误，应改为“make it safer for pedestrians”，使句子语法正确且表达清晰。