交通— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer has some good points but contains several language errors and unclear phrases, such as 'court works' instead of 'crosswalks' and 'baseline neighborhood' which is confusing. Try to use correct vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is concise and directly addresses the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, there are many crosswalks around where I live, especially near schools. These crosswalks make it much safer for pedestrians to cross the street, which is very important in my neighbourhood. For example, I often use them when walking to school or the local shops.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there is a vocabulary mistake with 'conjunction' instead of 'congestion'. To improve, use accurate vocabulary and add linking words to explain your points more fully. Also, try to provide a bit more detail or examples to enrich your answer within the 5-sentence limit.

範例: Yes, I would definitely like to see improvements in traffic management in my area. Currently, congestion during peak hours causes long delays and increases air pollution. For instance, the main road near my house gets very crowded every evening, which makes commuting stressful and slow.

× Yes, there are quite a number of court works around where I live, especially near schools.

✓ Yes, there are quite a number of crosswalks around where I live, especially near schools.

The student used 'court works' instead of 'crosswalks'. 'Crosswalks' is the correct plural noun referring to pedestrian crossings. Using the correct plural noun is essential for clarity and accuracy.

× These course works make it much safer for public to cross the street, which is important in the baseline neighborhood.

✓ These crosswalks make it much safer for the public to cross the street, which is important in the local neighbourhood.

The phrase 'for public' is missing the definite article 'the'. In English, 'the public' is the correct form when referring to people in general. Also, 'baseline neighborhood' seems incorrect; 'local neighbourhood' fits better contextually.

× Like my for example, I often use them when.

✓ For example, I often use them.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Like my for example' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.

× Currently conjunction during peak hours is a major problem causing long delays and air pollution.

✓ Currently, congestion during peak hours is a major problem causing long delays and air pollution.

The word 'conjunction' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'congestion'. Also, a comma after 'Currently' improves sentence clarity. The sentence structure is corrected for meaning and grammar.